|Reviews for Reign of Power|
| Kelly chapter 6 . 5/1/2012
Darling, there is no thought put into this story. You have many contradicting statements throughout the story. Is Harry mad at his friends or not? Are you even keeping track of the characters you're repeatedly introducing? There are a great deal of characters, and there isn't much time spent with each one. Also, your grammar is killing me. Where - a place or destination. Example: Where is Harry going? Harry is going where the roses bloom in the spring. Were: past tense of are, used for both plural and singular 'you'
. They were going to the store, where they would buy bananas.
I'm not flaming, and yes, I know that this story is complete. But you could really improve, I'm just trying to helpfully critizise.
| Margaret Luna Sullivan chapter 19 . 4/29/2012
Not a clue for the water dragons' enclave. Arthur PenDraagon for the last to pull the Gryffindor sword
| 123 chapter 29 . 4/26/2012
This was quite an amazing read! Thank you so much for sharing your story!
| MzMilo chapter 7 . 4/24/2012
| AddictedtoHPForever chapter 29 . 4/22/2012
Will you be writing a sequel to this?
| love.light chapter 29 . 4/17/2012
I admire your very magnetic style of writing, in the sense that once you start reading you can not stop.
For me the ending was very unique and while I was reading I felt like i was in a roller coaster ride filled with action and drama.
I wish your writing will take you far. Keep it up. Congratulations!
| Rheastar chapter 29 . 3/28/2012
Woohooo! you've got guts! Good Job! I really enjoyed this wild ride of a story.
| Ebru Gunduz Lestrange chapter 29 . 3/17/2012
now you aught to be proud in knowing that your story has still been able to lure in readers over these what? 4? 5 years? congratulations! on a job well done but, your grammer and spelling left something to be desired. i found that you repeated your little habit of mixing up your "D's" and "T's" i really did enjoy this ficlet of yours. truely a masterpiece in it's own right.
If i am ask you one thing, why did you make Harry a baby? why was he reborn? I really do think the Child deserves a fresh start, wipe the slate clean but will those that love and care for him remember? will they just leave him be with a lovong family? The-Boy-Who-Lived finally going to have te happy family he deserved? and why not give him back his birth parents? magic so pure and old able to bring back those he knew almost nothing about but still loved? give him the family he always wanted. James. Sirius. Lily. Remus... what of Severus? i know he was hateful but for Lily whould you grant him his happiness, to mend a great wrong done by his slytherin loyalties?
i am gald to have read your story and i bid you ado
Proud Daughter of Muggles,
May your ink run strong as the blood in your veins,
Long Live the Memory of Harry Potter
| Mararsi chapter 29 . 3/5/2012
Damn that was well written. Really interesting plot, thanks for glossing over some bits and.. whatever, great job, thanks.
| timewhisper chapter 29 . 3/2/2012
I can only express that this history is superb, a magnificent end.
| Alium chapter 29 . 2/26/2012
I loved reading your story! It was well written and the plot was interesting. I liked how you portrayed the canon characters and how you developed your OCs. The different personas created by Harry, especially Morrigan, were amazing. And the ending was really original. I would never have guessed it would end like that. Thank you for this fic! :D
| sarah999 chapter 29 . 2/21/2012
Oh my God. I am speechless. This is an amazing story. It's astounding.
Once you get into it, you have to continue reading until you either finish it, or until you can't keep your eyes open. I absolutely loved reading this story. It's just...wow. You included everything. I can't say enough about it. It's so detailed and in-depth. Thank you very much for writing this story, and thank you to whatever/whoever inspired you to write it and everything in each chapter. I'll have to come back later on in life and re-read this, as it is re-reading worthy material.
Anyways, it's 2:10am for me. I really wanted to finish the story and get to the ending, which was 'bloody brilliant'.
Amazing job you did with this story.
| FairAris chapter 29 . 2/18/2012
I liked this story the second time just as much as the first. If I could, I would rate it five stars.
| razzi2010 chapter 29 . 2/17/2012
One of the best stories i've read on this site. And probaly one of the best thought out ones, i duno your story just seems to flow correctly, and the ending has got to be given it's due, very well writen conclusion to one of the best independent harry fics i've read congratulations on this piece ! :-D
| kayamira chapter 29 . 2/1/2012
It was a joy to read your story - and I have to admitt I am glad that I don't have to wait for the next chapter. You put a lot of thought in the story itself, in the backgroundinfo as well as into the symbolic motives, and I can only imagine the amount of research you had to put in it.
What a pity that the public will never know that Potter and Morrigan were the same person - that would have been a good laugh! I personally would have loved to see a bit more of the Werewolves, but both them and the vampires kept out of the war - oh well, can'T have aeverything, can you?
Thank you very much for sharing your story with us - it is a remarkable piece of work.