A brilliant story, perhaps I read twice. However even though I know the author cant do much but go back and edit which they shall do, this story has too many spelling and grammatical errors. And frankly both times I read it has annoyed me greatly.

Okay, this is, and I do not use this descriptor lightly, epic. Nice and unusual final battle and that ending was totally unexpected, I admit. There is a desperate need of proof reading, but otherwise this fanfic is pretty darn good. Especially for something that was done back in 2007 - we have a lot of fanfics done since then and not all of them half as good as this. I like how the ancient bloodlines came to play, reminiscent of Basilisk Born. Making Harry half a Seer and building on that is a nice and unusual touch too.
Thank you for the story.

Very disappointed in this chapter. Leaving would-be kidnappers scot free. Really wish he would've just discreetly off them without any trace and then pretend he wasn't there at all.

Eh, what a blunder that final scene.
First, Tonks is not the only half-blood there. Snape, literally the half-blood prince, anyone?
Second, it's not Name Surname1 Surname2 like in spanish-speaking countries (and even there it's paternal, then maternal surnames, not vice versa). It should be Name Surname2, neé Surname1. And even then it's applicable to Andromeda only, because Nymphadora do not technically hold Black surname anyways, he was born Tonks. Best she can get is Nymphadora Tonks, lesser family branch of Most Ancient and Noble House of Black. Great story, but sheesh, some brushin up is in order here.

Great story so far, but lack of formating and a lot of orthographical errors make it really hard to read. Most glaring example would a persistant usage of "where" in place of "were".

wow good start to the story

Dios que historia tan antigua, cuando se empezó a inscribir yo era una bebe jejeje, excelente historia:)

For all that is good, learn the difference between "where" and "were"...every sentence you use one of those you get it wrong.

This story really was a breath of fresh air, original as shit, great story and plot, in my opinion good pacing and interesting development of the magic.

This is brilliant, almost flawless, and it is a nice change to see Harry standing up for
himself against Dumbledore and asserting himself. One thing I am certain of, though, is that
Dumbledore is too Slytherin to be Headmaster of Hogwarts. Aberforth would have been the
more logical-and rational, choice to be Headmaster of Hogwarts.

This is one of the better-and far more original Harry Potter fanfictions that I have read in
quite a long while, especially with Harry acting independently of Dumbledore.

This is one of the best fan fictions I have ever read!
Thank you so much for writing it.

Amazing story!

AWOL - Absent Without Leave
IE just took off/disappeared etc withou telling anyone where you were going/had been.

THE Best story I have read so far. I don't review stories most of the time but you have earned the right. Better than the actual book if I say so myself. most fanfictions have shunned Ron but you gave him quite a good role. your story is good enough to be published. I am so glad I found this story.
Keep it up!