Reviews for Converging Paths
Sdarian chapter 5 . 4/12/2010
The only real comment I have for this is that his power seems rather more limited then the others. While he can track Angels, that's just this dimension, whereas the super strength, luck, tech interface, etc.. all seemed to be something more as they would work on most any world... Maybe if his power was simply to track powerful enemies or something similar that would allow it to help in any fights on any world he is on...
Sdarian chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
This is off to an interesting start.

Also, I agree with your issues with LCL. One of my issues with it, is how they say that it's used as shock absorption. Unless it's some kind of non-newtonian fluid, which would make breathing it even harder, liquid is a terrible shock absorber as it actually transfers the force of impact far better then air does and has a far better chance of damaging you. A bomb exploding somewhat near you in air (assuming that far enough away that it's not instantly lethal), is far less lethal then the same bomb at the same distance while in water.
Birga chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
good to see an update, and not to be picky about your note at the end but the bends is caused by nitrogen bubbles in the blood, it never says that nitrogen is a component of LCL. no nitrogen no bends.
Rc1212 chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
Great story! Love how you do the characters!
deathgeonous chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
Neet little crossover here. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
starburst98 chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
so while you hate old asuka, what about this new one you are making her into? and what is shinji's relation to rei in this, half-sister or what?
kamikage86 chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
This story is getting good but I have some questions: can Makoto and Ifurita have children, will Shinji and Misato get into a romantic relationship, and will Misato's infertility caused by second impact be fixed for if/when she gets in a relationship with Shinji they can start a family? Hope you can update more often waiting is torture.
borg rabbit chapter 4 . 5/5/2008
Please update someday. Great story...still.


borg rabbit chapter 2 . 5/5/2008
I've REALLY been enjoying this story, yet another with pathetically few reviews. I'll put it in my favorites in hopes others will be encouraged to read it.


Ant Crown chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Well...Two things...

1. Later in around turn of the Mellinia...We were treated to an upgraded version with true LHWs. That is according to the Source book in which Zinv was a product of the Aliens that Stole/Kidnapped Washu.

Which leaves Zinv not as powerful as Idol.

I praticularly cared about the details :D.

2. Let the games begin
RDS chapter 3 . 4/7/2006
Glad to see you wrighting again alwas have enjoyed reading your work hope to see more of it soon
Zenithar chapter 3 . 4/5/2006
ok ill be honest. While the writing style is good. It just is plain hard to read. I can read a chapter at a time then I have to go take a break, because for the most part it just seems so dull.

Though i definetly like the fact that you, unlike many others, have bothered to make the convienece of making it easier to read by breaking the blocks of words into paragraphs.

While talent wise, and possibility wise id give it a 9. I just cant see it as that enjoyable so with that note. id have to say on enjoyment due to the dullness a 5 out of 10.
RedShadow64 chapter 2 . 3/25/2005
" Asuka is a stuck up bitch whose sole purpose in the show is to bring down Shinji’s psyche. "

If you think that's her only side, then you need to put more thought in this.

Have a nice day.
bmatsea chapter 2 . 3/25/2005
great second chapter. had to look back to the last chapter to catch up before I read this one but it was worth it. So with that in mind. could you give a quick reveiw about what happened before at the beginings of you next chapter. It would help so that I can skip to the good stuff. Keep it up.
KoalaKiller chapter 2 . 3/25/2005

M, boring...

...though what would it be like screwing someone twice your age I wonder...

Oh well, that was 45 seconds I won't get back.
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