Reviews for Converging Paths
Chief316 chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Great story! I hadn't been seeing very much in terms of quality Eva fanfic, but loe and behold I come across your fic. While I've read Eva/Dual crossovers before (two actually) this one seems a little more intriguing with the inclusion of El Hazard (great series). There were a few grammar and spelling errors, but that's hardly mentionable in comparison. The only thing I'd take note of is LCL wouldn't be thrown up, it'd be coughed up. I'm pretty sure someone that actually injested LCL would throw up, but that's beside the point.

As it is, keep up the good work and I look forward to future updates.
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