|Reviews for What wouldn't have been|
| spike'smate chapter 4 . 1/8/2018
good story but why wasnt finished?
| xfbuffyfan13 chapter 4 . 4/16/2005
this is really good. would have been nice for tara to have made it.
| MuffledSnickers chapter 4 . 4/11/2005
Aww, poor tara :( and poor willow :( and poor dawn :(...and jeez ur sick buffy lol, nyway, nice story, intresting :)update soon, relly like ur new seasons w/ tara, they r so much better than the real seasons. N' they focus on willow n' tara more :)
great story, update soon, kant wait to hear more. N' dont rush, when ur stories kome out they r good, we wont leave you b/c u make us wait, that's kindof one of the exciting parts, n it should be fun for you, to make us wait so long and get so impatiant
lol, ok im done. Nice story, like the theme (TARA!) keep it up :)
| Dark Gotham chapter 4 . 4/10/2005
Great chapter I really like it.
| MuffledSnickers chapter 3 . 3/24/2005
Great so far, i really luv it, its wonderful, just my opinion, but do 4 b/c i want to see how the gang reacts when willow tells them, jus my thinkin' but do as you please. Relly good story, i luv how u changed it. Tara's alive! ok, im not gettin' over that fact any time soon, luv the works, keep em up, update soon!
| MuffledSnickers chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
OMG I LUV IT, relly out of all of the stories i've read this is the BEST! especially with Tara alive! oh, i kould just liv off this forever, this brightened my day. Brightened my view! I luv this! Ur the greatest writer! Tara's alive! y didn't i think to write somthin like that! ur story is great too! keep writin, i kant wait to read more, ur the best! update soon
| Dark Gotham chapter 3 . 3/18/2005
Really great chapter I like it.
| Aline S chapter 2 . 3/12/2005
This is great! I'm loving it! How I with that it happen this way...
Anyway, if you want take a look on my history : Before now and forever. It's about Willow and tara too...
| darkwillow7 chapter 2 . 3/10/2005
You are doing a GREAT job! Continue!
| katie farmer chapter 2 . 3/7/2005
good fic, write more please.
| Yaten Driretlan The Wicked chapter 2 . 3/6/2005
Nice chapter, it is getting exciting, I hope you update very soon, good luck
| Dark Gotham chapter 2 . 3/6/2005
This is getting so cool! I was so happy to see that you had chapter/
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2005
Hi, Lauren again. My accout is being pissy and it won't let me access your e-mail address so I'm giving you my aol one. I would like to proof read your story for you. My e-mail is leonoral6 If your interested I'll beta your story, (that's just fancy fic talk for proof reading). To let you know, I did find some more mistakes, like commas for example. This is entirely selfless, it has nothing to do with the fact that I want to know what happens.
Lauren aka Hermione Chase
| A.R chapter 2 . 3/5/2005
I really hope you update soon. This chapter was the best chapter you have written this far in this story. Really hope you keep was an exellent chapter!
| Blah2789 chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Thank you for the idea. If anyone would like to Prof-read my story before I put the next chapter up ((Which is about finished)) Please E-mail me or tell me in a review