Reviews for What If Mulan passed the Matchmakers' test?
KiliFiliThorinLove chapter 9 . 11/23/2013
They both sound like preteens and their parents sound waaaaayyyy too modern
Guest chapter 35 . 10/13/2013
Again with the way too strong language and most of the story was illogical and a bit far fetched.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/13/2013
I really don't think a Disney movie like mulan would have too strong language. Plus you might want to be careful with the speech and not talk like modern time teenagers
countrycat chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
I noticed there was a misspelling. It's not Mulans'. That makes it seem like there is more than one Mulan. The correct spelling is Mulan's.
daianapotter chapter 32 . 3/1/2013
irst mulan and now shang... you really want be killed
daianapotter chapter 29 . 3/1/2013
"I have heard a great deal about you. Disobeying your husband, and a direct order. Putting his life in danger just to save yours." Mulan felt horrible and dropped her head as low as it could go. "and you put your life in danger as well as your unborn child, just to save him and defeat the Huns… you have saved China."

dont true but well...
daianapotter chapter 28 . 3/1/2013
if you kill mulan now the next is was gonna be you xD
daianapotter chapter 27 . 3/1/2013
Mulan cant die O.O
daianapotter chapter 26 . 3/1/2013
like it but the battle was a little fast i think
daianapotter chapter 25 . 3/1/2013
i was wonder if in this fic shang's father survive... but we see that not (
daianapotter chapter 22 . 3/1/2013
hope that mulan could make something to stop him
daianapotter chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
hope that they could get back their baby
daianapotter chapter 19 . 3/1/2013
She could not disobey Shang... could she?

he knows how she is
daianapotter chapter 18 . 3/1/2013
like the story but sometimes you make that all happen so quickly that i get lost for moments
daianapotter chapter 17 . 3/1/2013
well she could find him
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