Reviews for Death's Embrace
PeachyApples chapter 17 . 3/18/2005
That was sweet
Stephanie chapter 17 . 3/18/2005
I have read all of your 17 chapters and I liked the story so far. I only submit my reviews at the end of all the chapters and you got a nice one. I like the story very much. Personally I do not mind that Christine isn't in the story. For the constructive criticism, just watch the spelling when you type and make sure you use "ing" instead of "en". Keep up the ggod work.
sarah chapter 17 . 3/18/2005
good chapter, keep writing:-D
mooseriot89 chapter 17 . 3/18/2005
Aww YAY she saw behind the mask (not the actual mask the mask of insecurity that is...ERIK! lol sorry I'm kinda...weird at the moment) nehoo yeah great chappy UPDATE NOW!
Sara chapter 14 . 3/16/2005
I really enjoy this story! Your writing style is eloquent. . . please continue this piece! )
Countess Alana chapter 14 . 3/15/2005
woo hoo! he kissed her! she kissed him! they both kissed each other! yay! update really soon! :)
mooseriot89 chapter 14 . 3/15/2005
HOO NELLY! Yes, they kissed WOOT! Update, update now!
Aylah chapter 7 . 3/14/2005
Moving along well Cor, if you want me to check some grammar and stuff let me know and I'll send you the thing over email. I'll finish this when I have time. Adio!
Countess Alana chapter 12 . 3/14/2005
hey! awesome chapter! i can't wait for more! i love how erik feels such a powerful connection with claire! i can't wait to see what happens between them next! update soon! ;)
mooseriot89 chapter 11 . 3/13/2005
Aww poor tortured Erik how we love him so...I'm JUST reading the Susan Kay version...omj...I cried to many times and I'm not even halfway through it! lol aww me pathetic _ great chappy update soon!
La Vik chapter 10 . 3/11/2005
Me likey. It definitely hits a perfect bullseye as far as characterizarion goes. Much better than what I tried to do in my story. Update soon!
Countess Alana chapter 10 . 3/11/2005
awesome awesome awesome! woo hoo! i loved this chapter! i'm so so glad you updated and i can't wait for more! update really soon! :)
cherioxxx chapter 4 . 3/11/2005
I like how this has no Christine. I never really liked her...
phantomgoddess34 chapter 10 . 3/11/2005
i love your story plz update! :P
mooseriot89 chapter 10 . 3/11/2005
Kick. Ass. Story. Update. Now.
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