That was sweet

I have read all of your 17 chapters and I liked the story so far. I only submit my reviews at the end of all the chapters and you got a nice one. I like the story very much. Personally I do not mind that Christine isn't in the story. For the constructive criticism, just watch the spelling when you type and make sure you use "ing" instead of "en". Keep up the ggod work.

good chapter, keep writing:-D

Aww YAY she saw behind the mask (not the actual mask the mask of insecurity that is...ERIK! lol sorry I'm kinda...weird at the moment) nehoo yeah great chappy UPDATE NOW!

I really enjoy this story! Your writing style is eloquent. . . please continue this piece! )

woo hoo! he kissed her! she kissed him! they both kissed each other! yay! update really soon! :)

HOO NELLY! Yes, they kissed WOOT! Update, update now!

Moving along well Cor, if you want me to check some grammar and stuff let me know and I'll send you the thing over email. I'll finish this when I have time. Adio!

hey! awesome chapter! i can't wait for more! i love how erik feels such a powerful connection with claire! i can't wait to see what happens between them next! update soon! ;)

Aww poor tortured Erik how we love him so...I'm JUST reading the Susan Kay version...omj...I cried to many times and I'm not even halfway through it! lol aww me pathetic _ great chappy update soon!

Me likey. It definitely hits a perfect bullseye as far as characterizarion goes. Much better than what I tried to do in my story. Update soon!

awesome awesome awesome! woo hoo! i loved this chapter! i'm so so glad you updated and i can't wait for more! update really soon! :)

I like how this has no Christine. I never really liked her...

i love your story plz update! :P

Kick. Ass. Story. Update. Now.