Reviews for Chellony's and Challenge's story
Ryoa chapter 2 . 3/30/2005
This is pretty good...a little abrupt, to be honest. And next time, could you please try to add commas? They make the reading ever so much easier on the brain, and the eyes. But i love that sombody else actually shared enoght of an interest in Xanth to write a ficcy on it. Mine is "Has anyone seen my socks" , a few lines down from the top. Feel free to read it. Keep writing, with the simple changes added in there, and you should have lotsa fans! Have a good day, night, afternoon...whenever you read this,

Ryoa