Reviews for Breathe
Shippo-kun347 chapter 3 . 4/12/2005
That was an ok chapter except for the Pokemon Movie 20 thing, I thought that movie was ok, the only part that I liked in that movie was when Slowking said while he was standing out in the snow, "I wish I had some pants." lol.

This is a cool story write more.
Shippo-kun347 chapter 2 . 3/6/2005
Hm, I know that this is going 2 sound like a big "WELL DUH!" but here it goes, why is Inu working on a carosal (sorry if I spelled it wrong) but if it is then why? update soon and write more.
Aero Tendo chapter 2 . 3/6/2005
Nice story so far! I wonder what is under the tarp, tho I have my suspicions.

You might want to run a spelling checker next time before you post but otherwise it was really well done. :)

UPDATE SOON!
sapphire-glass chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Hey, I like how this story is coming out. Update when you can.