Reviews for Foxhound
hilternico chapter 4 . 7/17
U just made him a sayajin
yindragonkiba chapter 9 . 7/1
Pretty good fic can’t wait to read more
Ivarr chapter 6 . 3/1
I am finding this a most enjoyable read. It is fairly different from the rest. Good work so far.
Canadian Menteuse chapter 1 . 2/17
I know the story ended years ago, but had such a profound effect on me, but I’ve come back to read it again so many times. The imagery, created by the crucible’s, is nearly therapeutic for the reader, as you feel deeply with the main character, you feel like you’re going through his trials as well, and even if you’ve never had these problems in particular, you feel elated and assess your own problems are solved when he passes through these trials. I would love to see the story continue and maybe end it a that’s such a Naruto moment right before a battle. But that’s not where you as a writer are or may ever be so I just want to say thank you for having written what you have.
Ashera fanfics chapter 7 . 12/8/2022
I like this story, but I didn't like this chapter, too much unnecessary stuff. It feels like reading a filler arc.
You were probably young when you wrote this, but I find the rythm to be too slow. You know, like when you compare the Lord of the Ribgs books and movies, the books have a major pacing issue that loses most readers.
Your chapters could all be cut into 2 or 3, it would make them easier to read.
Since it's so old, I don't even expect you to read this but well...
GarnetMonstrosity chapter 1 . 6/16/2021
this story is older than i am. im july 2005, this story’s March 2005
MASK3D-B4TT4LION chapter 9 . 12/18/2020
Annoying story without sense... author stupid.
LOL chapter 6 . 9/26/2020
You hype naruto up, and have ino beat him? so stupid
Astreaus chapter 9 . 3/11/2020
I love your story, and wish you would continue it, but I would understand if you gave up on it. If so, would it be too much to ask for a reason?
MadManWithAHat chapter 9 . 1/17/2020
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...(pause for breath)... oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Why isn't this glorious thing updating anymore?!
candy4beth chapter 8 . 9/7/2019
I wish you had continued to write this it's really good
Wika0304 chapter 9 . 9/1/2019
please update, it's great
nielnica12 chapter 3 . 7/12/2019
This is reaaallllyyyyy fcking sloooowww
nielnica12 chapter 3 . 7/12/2019
When are we going to see narutooooo
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2019
Quit overpowering villains to a laughable extent. If they are untouchable and can't be captured by a Sannin and can block a kyuubi chakra powered rasengan with a sword they are too fucking much. They will come and torment the hero through the whole thing without ever being seriously hurt. If you set up that kind of frustrating shit in chapter 1 i dont wannna see the rest.
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