|Reviews for Wolf Mask|
| Angel Fantasy chapter 6 . 12/27/2015
Ah come on, this can't be stopping here! Things were finally starting to get interesting! XD
Good work interweaving Kakashi's relationship to the Inuzuka clan, and you did a very good job at replacing Hana with Kiyame as Kiba's older sister. She certainly had an impressive bark and a terrifying bite. Kakashi's gonna have it bad for his upcoming spar with Gai...
I cross my fingers that you'll do a sequel for this. It's too good to be left hanging like this...
| jj chapter 6 . 8/10/2015
i kinda want more
| TXJ chapter 6 . 8/2/2015
That was an emotional rollercoaster ride.
| ItStartsWithZ chapter 6 . 4/26/2015
That was refreshing. Thanks!
| loup-13 chapter 6 . 8/16/2013
the ending is awesome
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2012
I love it! Riveting...
| Taryn Myst chapter 6 . 7/12/2012
Great story! I like it I love it I want some more of it! Thanks for the awesome story!
| The Leaf 180 chapter 3 . 5/15/2011
im gona use that!
| Bane of Shinigami chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
Great read I enjoyed
| illereyn chapter 6 . 9/15/2010
Wow. Great story with awesome development in the characters. The action scenes read quite smoothlly too. I'm really glad this time, Kakashi was able to help another ninja make the right decision. I hope it makes him feel better about Team 7!
| LongLiveHumour chapter 6 . 9/9/2010
This is the second time I have read this. The first I was too high on endorphins to write anything suitably sophisticated - let's hope my second attempt passes the test. First of all, I LOVED it. (Sophistication just went out the window.) This is the sort of story I like best of all: a nice blend of action, drama, introspection, careful angst and (vital ingredient) humour. Plus all the little tit-bits of information that make it real, set in a world that exists and has living, breathing people in it. Now, on to the people... brilliant job. Again, they feel nice and solid, in character and slightly insane (definition of Homo sapiens). Lessee, what else. Descriptions vivid and not intrusive, flow and rhythm captivating, etcetera, etcetera. Dammit, I've dropped back into worship mode. Ah, well. Thanks so much for this.
| giganemo chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Hey, seems promising. It's an interesting pairing and I like the fact that you used an existing kunoichi that we don't know much about :)
One thing though, and this is a pet peeve of mine, something a lot of people don't seem to think about:
Do you realize that shinobi don't actually say the jutsu names out loud?
In the manga the name of the jutsu is generally in a small box in the corner just to let us know what they're doing. It's only in the anime that they are made to yell them out, which is really really stupid when you think about it because they are essentially shouting out their intentions before doing them which completely negates any advantages they might have gained by creeping around quietly.
So, yeah, a pretty big pet peeve of mine there :/
Anyway, looking forward to reading the rest of the story :)
| Shai PeriHawk chapter 6 . 10/16/2009
Well I enjoyed the HECK out of that. Thank you.
| hey chapter 6 . 5/29/2009
good story. keep writing
| Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
Brilliant. And quite the original couple-to-be. Excellent writing.
Keep up the good work!