|Reviews for A Masters of the Universe Christsmas Carol|
| srx chapter 5 . 1/25/2007
wow. i cant believe keldor changde in the end
| dasz chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
hehehe- i'm sure this story is definitely, entirely unique in its category. I never before considered he-man compatible with A Christmas Carol, but it seems like you're pulling it off! makes me nostalgic for the holidays, too bad its July.
Wow! i can't believe i'm the first to review. There's not much too criticize here. The only thing i can suggest is that you work on the continuity of your story; it's well-written, but a little choppy. Perhaps you could add some more transitional sentences to make it flow better? Of course, i have no right to critique- i've never submitted anything- too scared!
I'll keep reading your story, though- great job!