Reviews for Remember to Breathe
OwlCookies XD chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
its sweet .
dandoune chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Sooo beautiful and deep, just like their special relationship 3
Yuna chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
I loved this! Awesome!

Great job!
1st Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
very,very,very,very good.
Melitza chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
That was extremely sweet, and with very classy sensual description. Seems in-character for both Roy and Riza, which is rare to find in fanfictions it seems.

Well done. I enjoyed it a lot, and would love to see more along the pairing from you.
Arc Trader chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Ooh. "Noot" bad.

OK, I'll drop the pseudo-Canadian tone.

I'll be honest: I don't really like Roy/Riza stories that get physical. That's the part of the pairing that has charmed me: it's so subtle, yet so obvious at the same time; there's no need for them to get all kissy or huggy, because you *know* the connection is there.

Having thrown that over my shoulder, I will admit I liked this. Good that you put the emphasis on the fluff rather than the smut, because that allows our two lovable officers to be the same snarky personas we're so used to.

- Phantom Kensai
momiji-k chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
Oh I hope for their sake that some day in the story you can assume that scenes like this are true. They are so beautiful together and it seems so right. :)
cathaya chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Cute. Almost unbearably so. Aw ... it's just so kawaii. Very well written.
tania santiago chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
THIS STORY IS GREAT !YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE OF THIS

MAYBE A NEXT PART WITH THE SAME TYPE OF SCENES A BIT MORE EXPLICIT

PLEASE!
mercutio-rane chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
a lovely, gorgeous, well-written, fluffy piece of smexy, I must say! Beatifully done, quiet like a moment in the eye of the storm, especially with everything that's going on in their public lives. Beautiful!
saffiremoon21 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
write more XD please XD
Setine chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Perfect.
kokonutsu chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Short, but still very powerful. I like how they drop their masks for one another...s'cute.
AnimeGirl622 chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
OMG! OMG! I love this story! This is the best every! *squeels*
ShiroKitsune chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Absolutely beautiful and so true to character. You have to love Riza's little strict neurosis. The flow was very smooth and sweet with a bit of sentimentality and angst thrown in for good measure. I enjoy how she traces the scars as a reminder that she has to do better for him. It is a very Riza-ish thing to do. Very good job.
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