Reviews for Never Cut Twice
Princess Kitana chapter 12 . 3/20/2005
aw, i like how this chapter ended! great fic, update soon!
Gopu chapter 12 . 3/20/2005
Incredible chapter
SwordRaven chapter 12 . 3/20/2005
Wow, a fantastic story (one with a good background)

the characters of your story are really amazing (Kisame and Itachi are just plain funny; Naruto too is good and the sword is cool)

in addition i like the idea of Kyuubi bound into the sword

your ideas are original and new, thats a good change from all the other naruto stories
PersonaJXT chapter 12 . 3/20/2005
Eh, i wondered why i seemed to have more yen then i should _;

I was basing my stuff off of this notebook i compiled and it seems the last zero got erased or smudged out or something -_-;

Sry, my bad, kewl story though, specially like the sword thing, has nice pictures, looks kewl, and can think for itself _

Keep up the good work and update soon!
Peter Kim chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
Gaara can convinced the ninja who watched his team get killed that he is mistaken about Temari killing the Leaf Ninja or face slow and painful death by Gaara's sand and Kankuro's poisons and Gaara will make sure that ninja will tell the Hokage that he is mistaken. Besides I would like to see Temari return to the Sand and Naruto vist her from time to time. The alliance between Sand and Leaf is over due to Leaf declaring Temari a missing nin.
darkshaman817 chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
yay totally aw3some story
Night-Owl123 chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
update soon _
Anonymous informant chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
Just for miscellaneous Naruto info.

The money used in Naruto is called ryou and 1 ryou is equal to 10 yens, according to the official Naruto databook written by Kishimoto.
Big Daddy Cool chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
Damn,

that is one bad ass fic bro. I loved the way how u slowly develop the character of naruto and temari. Please conotnue writing as fast u are heheh
nebulord chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
Awesome fic! UPDATE PLZ!
foxfirespirit chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
What can a Master-Fan do that a Battle fan cant and I love Naruto's sword but can he use it at its full potenchel yet
keebler-elmo chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
good chapter. i like the battle fan, but naruto shouldnt have to give kyuubi stuff everytime he wants something. he should be the superior in the relationship
Rbotekmaster chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
Man, this fic is awesome!

*Adds to favorities list *

One thing though. If my calculations are right, Temari's only a year older than Naruto at most. Oh, and there's an author that put up a story that's a blatant ripoff of this one. He knows who he is... _

Keep up the good work.
FenrisLupus chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
Aw friggin haw, Nawuto got a huwg, pretty "adowable", huh? Great chapter, or great fic for that matter. I enjoy reading it, I think you balance the "serious" and the "humor" quite nicely, making the fic pretty enjoyable to read, and it's always fun knocking off serious characters, Gaara in particular. Kakashi being anticlimatic is absolutely hilarious, it seriously cracked me up, oh the wonders of porno... that sounds so wrong.

The facts you've included seem well researched, or atleast have *ghasp* common sense applied to them, what an outrage! You actually have reasons for Naruto being dressed such and such, and you even have fencing physics applied, I applaud you, yes I do.

You have a decent vocabulary, better than mine, anyhow, and your grammar is decent, again, better than mine. Your writing style is also varied and enjoyable to read. Only complaint I could think of, is that it's sometimes hard to see when you've changed scene, maybe you could add a line or something as to mark the scene changes? Just a suggestion. Good to see someone update rather frequent, maybe I should take on after you.

So for all these points, the weekly cookie of doom awards goes to: Shadowmaster62! *gives cookie of doom*
VentMonster chapter 12 . 3/19/2005
hmm iruka has something big planned

wonder what

lol so now temari starts to notice naruto in a new light now that she knows his secret and he gave her a great ass present

anyway update soon like the chapter
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