Reviews for Never Cut Twice
Big Daddy Cool chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
Damn That was excellent chapter, specially in the end. The way you created the tension with chess board, I applud to you my friend.
alchemistninja123 chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
cool 0o 0.0 naruto imitated the Hakke? wow
Jade Eye's chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
They kindnaped one of Naruto's "precious people", man their in deep shit now.
crazy-antman chapter 14 . 3/24/2005

This is really cool!

No holding back...

I hope you keep writing!

This is really great!
VentMonster chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
why the fuck is he teaching her rasengan?

thats his personal technique from his father and teacher not something to be passed to temari just so she stronger teach her some other jutsu

sorry but rasengan is narutos and his alone
Fantasy's Magic chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
oh update update!

Grummur chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
WOOT! F#CK em up naruto! Bleh, don't turn temari into a Mary Sue, everybody likes her because she's so damn tough :D. This story remains awesome, and i eagerly await your update!

Gopu chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
Great chapter
Cobra-100 chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
Whew! I thought something bad hapened when you abruptly stoped updateing... I'm glad you are ok.
foxfirespirit chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
One rule to survive: Never piss off a half demon missing-nin and kidnap said nins girl. *shiver*

Update soon
The Eromancer chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
Kill their asses! burn, tear, rip, mame, bisect them, and by gods kill them! GO NARUTO!
KunochiDreamer chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
Nice chapter.
ArrowOfHikaru chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
Zoroz chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
oh u shuld start the next chapter with the leaf team hearing a huge demonic scream of rage that makes em all piss their pants :) moremore
Skuld's Sentaro4 chapter 14 . 3/24/2005
uh oh, they have taken Temari...bad choice _, lol, Hakke Demon claw: 264 hands eh _ sounds itneresting lol, keep up the good work and udapte soon V_
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