Reviews for Braver World
defunctaccounttexmon chapter 6 . 12/27/2010
Your writing voice is very fitting with a story like this. It is written pretty well and is very thought-provoking which is very nice. It's a pleasantly rebellious tone that gells nicely with the different elements of the story.

My only complaints would be to watch for missing commas, reign in a little of the capitalization, and to cite some of the poetry you use. Fix those little issues up, and this will be good to go.

Happy writing! :)

Texty Monster

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Kay Nastalia chapter 7 . 8/8/2007
Wow... I really liked this. The ending was a bit abrupt, but it was an excellent read. Fantastic job.
born to be hanged chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
I liked what you said in your first paragraph, that they were still all doomed. They were only different because they knew that they were doomed. That's deep.

I spotted some missing commas, but that was about it.

Bravo, this was a nice piece. It makes one think, just like Huxley's book. Cheers.

*Meltintalle