|Reviews for ivory star|
| Gesshoku2 chapter 2 . 1/21/2010
Please hurry with the next chapter I really want to read it.
| KiyiyaHowlingWolf chapter 2 . 12/15/2008
aw this story is so sweet plz update soon!
| timidwolfhazel chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
hi thier i am the author of this story. to let all of you know my dad did something to the computer so ican't go on my acount any more so this story whon't have anymore chapters but i did find a new way to get stories on a different acount so this story well be on it as well and some others. my pen name is timidwolfhazel from now on
| AdventureGodess chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
I think your story is very good but could use some mere detail and spell check. But other than that i think its great!
| reikat chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
This is very cool. But your second chapter is the same as your first.
| Lovebuggy chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
lol, this is wicked cute!
| avalonmage chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
you have a good story except u need to try to stretch the story and fix your spelling errors (you keep spelling ivory wrong)
| Lightfoot chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
This is a good beginning but you might want to pre-read before you put it up, you have some grammer and spelling mistakes. But This is sounding good. (Sorry if I sounded to critical.)