Reviews for When You Lose
sasha chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
it's okay.. a little boring but pretty good. nice job :)
vicious-kitsune chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
It was absolutely adorable. The descriptions and details were just right. Very well written and very enjoyable to read.
Thin-K chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
cute... so cute...

I loved reading this...

Great job!


Yazzy chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
That was really sweet...well done!

C.B. Magique chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
To my standards, that ending was a little crappy, but the content was good. I don't like yaoi romance in fanfics and I never will because it's just wrong!
LaDyFiCtIoN chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
As self proclaimed TxB queen, though I am cocky, I feel it's only right to say that firstly, wonderful perceptive of Tala's loss.

I very much enjoyed the interaction and your descriptions. Lovely. You've made this shipper proud of the pairing.
Lady Snowblossom chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Excellent. Its wonderful to see someone writing a story where the D-boys are actually human. I hope to see more from you.
Leafy2 chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
hey i like your story, its sweet and realistic. write more ok, im looking forward to reading it!