|Reviews for All My Yesterdays|
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/15
im cryin so hard right now u riped my haret out
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 34 . 1/6/2014
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 10 . 1/6/2014
Great work! In terms of editing, you keep incorrectly using the word "your". When a sentence can also be read the same way with the phrase "you are", then you are meant to use the contraction "you're".
For example: "Yes," she lied. "No, you're not," Sirius said...
| Alizarin098 chapter 34 . 10/3/2013
thank god there's a sequel because before I read that, you were going to get the most screechy, gibberishy review ever about Sirius- thanks for the sequel!
| Alybethed chapter 34 . 9/3/2013
Girl you broke my heart! It's 4 in the morning, I have school tomorrow at 9AM and I'm still AWAKE! You hook me up in this!
| SattlerSister90 chapter 20 . 7/10/2013
the chapters are a bit short but i am LOVING this story! im so glad theres two more installments to read!
| Jiru-senpai chapter 34 . 1/31/2013
Oops. I almost forgot to review.
Anyway, I was always a Dramione fan (since 2004?) and after stumbling on a Sirius/Hermione story two days ago, I was hooked. How could I not see this coupling before?!
Great story, by the way. Minimal technical errors and overall a satisfying storyline. Very easy to read through. :)
Thank you for sharing this.
On to the sequel!
| Romantic Journalist chapter 6 . 4/25/2012
I like this idea your running with, but it seems a little fast paced. Slow down a bit, perhaps incorporate a budding friendship between Hermione and a few Slytherins, such as Snape, Lucius, etc. The conversation between Dumbledore and Hermione should also slow down because jumping in takes the suspense away. Dumbledore and Hermione are cautious folk and rushing their conversation seems a discredit to their character.
| JenniseiBlack chapter 34 . 2/24/2012
Beautiful i love this it had me in tears. I am getting ready to read the 2nd one cant wait!,,,,
| Hotgirlow chapter 34 . 12/30/2011
update soon it's great I can't wait to read more.
| Maddaz a Hatter chapter 34 . 12/13/2011
Very creative. well done
| ashley4948 chapter 34 . 7/21/2011
such an amazing story!
| xenathefanwarrior chapter 4 . 4/25/2011
Er... no offence but this story isn't exactly the best you've done. I've noticed how well you've improved, though so yeah. This writing is more straight forward. But good none the less.
| zeralena chapter 34 . 11/23/2010
Beautiful story. Evil Dumbledore. Never letting Hermione remain happy! And that twinkle! It's infuriating sometimes! But I love your Sirius/Hermione stories quite a bit. I think I have all of them open in a tab or I've already read them. I don't know nor do I care. Anyways, I'm going to go read the sequel now. :)
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape chapter 34 . 11/8/2010
Is there a squeal?