Reviews for A Snowy Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A very good story, just the cup of tea for reading on a cold evening home. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly lovely... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely, just lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grins* Nice. *stares at the end* oh. Dear. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked that one. Until next time, alfalfa7 |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant! you captured their voices so well, and i love the undertone of... violence? creepiness... you know what i mean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() M. I love how I can relate to practically everything on your profile. :) |
![]() ![]() wow this is.. great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's hard to write good AxI, but you managed to capture the interaction between them perfectly. Integra's reaction to the rose, the way Alucard worked in the offer and his gesture at the end were all very in character and highlighted the romantic tension between the two of them without being googly or too harsh. This was a great short. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH dare you leave it there I demand that you write a second chepter plz beggs with puppy yes update plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that is how AxI stuff should be. Some of them are great! But some are just plain OOC, which gets really annoying. Great job! You did a fine job indeed! Gives my the chills too! Loved it too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a chilling, anime fic, nicely written indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Gorgeous. I don't know whether or not to say if you've kept them in character, but it's certainly a heck of a lot more believeable than most of the AxI stuff I've seen floating around out there. That last sentence gave me CHILLS. Do you hear me? Actual, honest-to-goodness CHILLS. Do you know how seldom that happens? Really. Give yourself a pat on the back for this one. Gorgeous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was intense... Good job! |