Reviews for Moods 2
josepast378 chapter 13 . 9/6/2014
IrĂ¡ a grieta history you really write very good congratulaciones for this history
Iamflybane chapter 13 . 6/12/2012
I am writing this from the standpoint of looking at Moods 1 and 2 together in their entirety. I greatly enjoyed how the author treated the gradual growing of the adult relationship between Ron and Kim, particularly the slow, incremental steps they take, heading toward the eventual consummation of their relationship. (I think every town has their own version of 'the chair'. Ours was an old pumping station by a lake.) I do not think this has ever been handled quite so well by any other author in all of KPFandom. However, the fact that this story is so brilliantly written magnifies the enormous letdown it leaves the reader with as it ends abruptly, well before the characters arrive at the consummation of their relationship that the author had been so artfully working towards, and only mentions the final steps in a brief, vague flashback, occurring a year later, seemingly scotch-taped on at the end. I was so disappointed at the ending that a truly shining star of a story crashed and burned, and left me... irritated.
taz0718twoaol.com chapter 13 . 10/9/2009
I HOPE THERES A MOOD THREE FOUR OR FIVE MAYBE A HOLE SEIRES OF THEM KEEP THEM GOING DID THEY GET MARRIED DID THEY HAVE KIDS DO THEY STILL GO ON MISSIONS HOW DID RON AND KIM GET BACK AT MON AND FLEX AFTER SETTING THEM UP LIKE THAT ETC AND SO ON WELL GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR OTHER STORIES AND AS ALWAYS MAY THE POWER PROTECT U
Katsumara chapter 13 . 4/13/2009
I read this long ago, but never reviewed. I'm not sure why I didn't.

Either way, I enjoyed both Moods/Moods 2 immensely. I like what you did with the final chapter, taking it into the future a bit. A year ahead is a nice little time-skip, and it's nice to see that here at 19 (I think?) they got engaged. You didn't expand upon what their school lives are like or anything, but I suppose it was so we could be left thinking about it. Also, did I read it correctly where Kim gave her virginity to Ron after a month and a half or was the part in ()'s her reflecting on it happening after she had written that in her diary? I was a little confused there.

Either way, I hope to see your writing sometime. You do great things. :)
Danny-171984 chapter 13 . 11/7/2007
I'm so happy that I read this story. It was very touching and exciting. A little weird out because of the lemon scenes, and yet disappointing that I didn't get to read the 'special' night. Go figure...Anyways, I'll be checking up your profile for more stories. I'm very impress by your stories...even though every chapter was short, it had a lot of good stuff. Keep on writing.

Danny
Danny-171984 chapter 12 . 11/7/2007
Man...if I had that talk with my ex...sigh...good times...
Danny-171984 chapter 11 . 11/7/2007
okay...danm...I don't know what to say...go kim? (whispering: lucky bastard :D
Danny-171984 chapter 10 . 11/7/2007
What a tale from Dr.D and Shego...I'm very impress...I didn't see that coming. It actually warm my heart...
Danny-171984 chapter 9 . 11/7/2007
It's great that you actually mention them. Dr.D and Shego...wow. I'm glad for them. I always knew that they would end up together. One question...Now that I remember...where is Rufus?
Danny-171984 chapter 8 . 11/7/2007
I can't believe that BonBon will actually start a fight. AGAINST Kim. She was a dead wish or something? Really...and now KP's face is marked...that sucks. Once you get a scratch in your face, its scarf that will never leave...sigh...

Danny
Danny-171984 chapter 6 . 11/7/2007
First of all, I have to say this. When the whole Moodulator thing started, they were at least sophomore or maybe juniors...and that would mean that they were at least 16 years old. Are you telling me that they are seniors? Big gap here...anyways, off to what I think about this chapter.

Whoa! I'm completely shock! First because of what Mr.D.P said at the end of this chapter. No way a 'dad' would say such thing about his OWN daughter. Really creepy. Second, because of the language Mrs.D.P used when she was talking to KP. It really sadden me to hear that they didn't loose their virginity to each other...it pained me to read it, actually.

Danny
Danny-171984 chapter 5 . 11/7/2007
What a rush! Ron was sure lucky to have Kim as a girlfriend. Too bad Kim's mom interrupted the whole thing.
Danny-171984 chapter 4 . 11/7/2007
Payback is a b* my friend...it is. So this is how it started...
Danny-171984 chapter 3 . 11/7/2007
What's this? I like, I like...LMAO!
Danny-171984 chapter 2 . 11/7/2007
Soulmates think alike...So...the talk huh...well, not that talk 'we need to talk' thing that kills the other when they are in a relationship, but the 'we need to talk' when they are trying to talk about 'beyond the boyfriend/girlfriend stuff.' Okay...I don't know where I'm going with this...off to the next chapter!

Danny
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