Reviews for Entangled
sophie16 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
OMG! You have to make a second part to this! Please!
risenshineartsy chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Aww man! I want to know what happens next ;)

Its good though nice job!
Rakked chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
That was funny and fun and tantalizing. Nice work :-)
SleepingSeeker chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Oh man, this was excellent! I think that's my word for all your stuff! Just excellent! And I don't think you'd need an M rating here, unless you were to expand this *hint hint! ;'D but once again, I found myself completely drawn into your story and it was great fun!
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Whoa. Awesome story. I can see this happening to Raph where he's with someone he really doesn't like. I also really like Gabrielle and how she's a villain and not a good guy but forced to be captured to her worst enemy. Nicely done on this, Jayde.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Tora tsume chan chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Very well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Moar plzzzzz
quali chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I loved the unintended sensuality in this fic. It tickled. _
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
heh, such naughty innuendos. very good though.
DeviousxXxSmile chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
OMG I loved it
Omicron the IceQueen chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
...Wow.

Just slagging wow. I bow, and take off my hat off to you and your amazing talent!

This was amazinly writing, you should be proud so of yourself.
Yvette1 chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Awesome story! VERY well written! Sexy, without being raunchy. This is goin in my faves list!
sunbune chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
oh. my. god.

This was AMAZINGLY sexy! A perfect example of how a story can push all the right buttons WITHOUT being explicitly 'sticky'. I'm not sure I want to know how you ever came up with this idea, but I LOVED it.

Mm... Raph tied up... delicious... must... reread...
calliopechild chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
XD That was great! The last line is just classic, and it so totally sounds like something Raph would say. She's gonna kick his shell when they get untied. I absolutely loved your summary, especially after I got the joke. _ I noticed that you don't have this marked as "complete", so if you were considering a sequel, I highly recommend it. Very good job, and very highly amusing. :D
greshunkai chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
that last sentence is a killer. would you care to think up just what the woman might say to answer the question? very well written. i got quite a laugh out of your very sly use of the similiar sounds of the words-could believe you did it on purpose. very enjoyable story. thank you.
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