Reviews for The Bachelor Party Revised
derektomlinson chapter 5 . 10/31/2019
a pissed off 18 hissing shouting yelling ok where is the bald headed midget cue ball asshole i call my husband at if what i hear is true i am going to put him on permanent life support
Tinekrbell16dais chapter 5 . 7/6/2016
This chapter was great please keep going with the story, I want to know what happens next. xoxox :) :3 ;) ;3
Haider chapter 5 . 12/17/2013
Wow, I thought you would make piccolo the least attractive one . I would like to read Gohan cheating on Videl. I hope you update soon.
sanakito chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
sinister plot...I LOVE IT!
hiuho chapter 5 . 1/19/2008
Please please please don't let Gohan give in to that whore Erasa!

Please let his love for Videl prevail!
Wandhappy chapter 5 . 11/28/2007
xxGohanxx chapter 5 . 10/11/2006
dude totally make a new chapter love the story I have a feeling that it is going to be interesting lol ok peace out
joo chapter 5 . 10/7/2006
realy col men! this chapter is realy awesome, i can't wait till the nexts chapters upload soon i can't wait to see how the story ends
taty chapter 5 . 9/7/2006
cool story! i just love read the 5th chapter, and i can't wait to read the next ones writte soon and fast
Ikorosu Shinso chapter 4 . 3/8/2006
what the hell...
ssj4 broly chapter 5 . 3/6/2006
good story please continue
troubles chapter 5 . 10/23/2005
the story so far has been really funny. I hope you update soon.
dark dragon 00 chapter 5 . 10/22/2005
good chapter
Ava chapter 5 . 10/21/2005

-is quite disturbed-

to answer your qurstion:

*Gohan will run away and curl ina ball

*Videl ain't that stupid...mabe Bulma and chichi...

*Piccolo... is just to green for 'im self

and I agree with Veggie and Goku... their wives are bitches...
Lei chapter 4 . 7/5/2005
lol that was halarius!

(actually that was the only chapter i read)

it was great please keep them coming

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