|Reviews for Ache|
| Rosa Cotton chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
| s. du jour chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Awww! A real Woobie moment for Raoul. Good job!
| ayruh chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
oh gosh. that made me wanna cry. :(
| Phantress chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
Umm...Hearts of Stone Inc...anyway...
This was incredible - and so Leroux it made me so happy! And yet, sad. I love this part in the book, so, it was so good to read it from a character's POV...and it is exactly what would have been going through his mind. I think your writing even shadows Leroux a bit, which is NOT choppy, etc. it's just a style choice. Very well done, bravo to you!
| I of So Little Words chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Can you say Gary Stu?
| carthagegirl chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Apparently Hearts of Stone is not a fan of the original novel, as this is COMPLETELY in-character and true to canon. And for that, I absolutley loved it. I think the way you wrote Raoul's thoughts really conveyed his sadness and despair. Thank you so much for this lovely fic!
*adding to favorites list*
| Hearts of Stone Inc chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
This is incredibly stupid. I do not say so simply because Raoul is a comfortable aristocrat who /does/ “get the girl”. The story was choppy, filled with short, blunt sentence and lacking abominably in description. Besides, it really is ridiculous to write a fic changing the story of Phantom of the Opera simply so that you can make the ending sad for another character. There is truly only one person suffering from unrequited love in the story, making this fic OOC.
H of S Inc.
If you hate me becaus of what I wrote and think I should die for being an Erik fan, than delete this and go play cards with your friends.
| first-rain chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I love this! I could feel Raoul's sorrow, and at the time I really needed it.
Thanks for writing this. From your fellow of R.A.O.U.L. society.
| Hikaru Hayashi chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Oh...::sniffle:: Poor Raoul...
This was depressing. It made me sad just because my sweet Raoul was sad. But this was very good! Raoul's character was very accurate and it was so well written and based off of Leroux.
Curse you, Christine Daae! How you toy with his emotions! You don't deserve to have him, you snottly little twit. But, even though this is what I think of Christine, she just seems right to be with Raoul, even though she is lower than dirt most of the time. And spacey...and awkward...
Anyway, this was excellent. I liked it. Good job! ::adds to faves::
| Lindaleriel chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Poor dear boy. She really just dosen't deserve him.
| BohemianCane04 chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Aw! This is awesome! Poor Raoul
| Shandethe Sanders chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
OMG...this is wonderful. So totally, completely and utterly Raoul. You did an amazing job of getting into his head. He seems just like he did in Leroux-sweet, passionate and naive. I loved this so much. As soon as I get the chance, I'm adding this to the Project Vicomte C2 list, if you don't object. It would be a very welcome addition!
Thank you so much for writing this. You made my day.
| AMarguerite chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Poor Raoul. *pats him* So wonderfully true to the book: Brava!
I'm sorry I didn't write this sooner... but I shall post a note with the url to this fic on the R.A.O.U.L. message board, and we'll see if we can't get this added to the C2 Community. It's so lovely...
| nebulia chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
Oh my...lovely lovely lovely...and it's how I sorta feel now...but it's SO Raoul and that makes it oh so wonderful and beautiful and, well, just georgeous.
| Tziporah chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
Poor Raoul. Very very good However, But to hell with society! just reminded me of enjolras but i am very very tired so dont take me seriously