Reviews for Outclassed |
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Anticia chapter 12 . 9/15/2012 Looking at the update date I take it as it IS abandoned now, too bad. But still it was really such a delightful read, your style is really great, so adoarble that I couldn't believe I could take without thinking "hey, it's corny" but it wasn't, probably because of the perfect light humour that defined the whole story. I'm going to come back later to check out if you have other stories for sure (I just kind of forgot to sleep while reading, in fact I was to go to bed after the 2nd chapter but kind of forgot meanwhile XD; ) |
Anticia chapter 7 . 9/15/2012 AHHH, Iruka got the answer from the kids - AWESOME! Loved his breakdown after that, can't help. And it was fun how you chose Gai to show the last part XD |
Anticia chapter 6 . 9/15/2012 Dawww, hahaha, too much chuckle and laughs on my part, uncontrolabble XD This happens to be a REALLY adorable and funny fic, I love it! XDDDD |
Anticia chapter 4 . 9/15/2012 Hahaha Kakshi and his "teachings" he is really horrible how innocently selfish he can just be XDDDD |
Anticia chapter 2 . 9/15/2012 Hahaha this is really amusing so far, can't stop giggling and grinning because of how you put in their thoughts and characters. I'm amused by Kakshi's ways at the same time I feel sorry for him for his state now. XD |
endingofbehan chapter 12 . 8/26/2012 I love it! My favorite part will just have to be Kakashi asking Iruka out. That was sooo hip and cool of Kakashi! |
kiimiichii chapter 12 . 6/14/2012 Waah this is too cute for words! :) |
starlesscity chapter 12 . 6/14/2012 Ridiculously cute and funny, awesome :D |
WhiteAsh chapter 11 . 3/27/2012 I miss this story. It was always so funny to read and having read it again this year I just... I miss it. |
mabidiso chapter 2 . 3/19/2012 Normally I don't do this [copy and paste reams of text from the story into my reviews], but in this case, I just wanted you to know exactly where in the story I was when I was caused to nearly choke to death on my spit as I was startled into laughing my ass off: It made him feel twelve. And considering that when he'd actually been twelve, he'd felt about thirty, that was saying something. He hadn't actually felt twelve since he'd been about six. 'Hey, Naruto, thanks for teaching Jiraya the sexy no jutsu so he can spy at bathhouses.' 'Hey, Naruto, thanks for helping Sasuke finally wrench the title of angstiest nin in Konoha from Neji, who's held it for three years running.' But Iruka was a teacher. So was Kakashi. But while Kakashi had taught three students for several months, Iruka had been teaching proto-nin hellions for years. That was why he'd been able to notice his stalker in the first place. Years of eight-hour days in the classroom with a bunch of students always willing to throw chalk, spitballs, and the occasional kunai at the back of his head had honed a situational awareness many a battle-hardened ANBU would have envied. After all, everyone knows good teachers have eyes in the back of their heads. Well, everyone except Kakashi, who had graduated the academy when he was six. Because there seemed to be an unspoken qualification for promotion he'd never have met… you had to be completely batshit crazy. It couldn't be coincidence that so many of them were off their rockers. He could feel their combined murderous intent radiating towards him. It was kind of cute. Still, he was awake and aware and ready to face a horde of young children who would instantly notice and exploit any weakness he might show. "Children, I'd like you all to go home a little early today. You're all much too young to watch a grown man have a nervous breakdown." Kakashi-sensei had said something about watching his genin scratch themselves only being funny for the first couple of days before Gai had once again given up trying to understand Kakashi and just challenged him. Ah, hell, this was a hidden village, a village chock-full of ninja, a place where facial scarring was practically a fashion statement. "If you close your eyes." Kakashi didn't take off his mask until at least the second or third date. After all, he didn't want anyone thinking he was easy. Once Gai fled the room, Iruka turned his sensei death gaze on anyone else in the room who might even be thinking of saying something to him. And being a teacher meant he could just tell. The room was silent as everyone attempted to make themselves look as inconspicuous as possible. A few enterprising souls transformed themselves into potted plants and even one very confused looking coat rack. There were many other places in the story where I unexpectedly found myself having a fit of some sort due to the spasms of hilarity working their way out of my system, but I thought I'd call it a day here. |
Cyhyr chapter 12 . 12/16/2011 I kept having to read certain selections aloud to my bf, who kept giving me weird looks when I'd burst out in giggles. And I think I may have a semi-permanent smile on my face for the next few days thinking about the conversation they had before they started making out. Cute. I really wish you would update soon... I so wanna see the third date! ~Cyhyr |
pinklatent chapter 12 . 10/27/2011 This is freaking hilarious and heartwarming at the same time. Kakashi dealing with a crush in his own, unconventional way. Poor Iruka! |
lady Alexas chapter 12 . 7/19/2011 awesome |
Mina Luriya chapter 7 . 7/10/2011 "Children, I'd like you all to go home a little early today. You're all much too young to watch a grown man have a nervous breakdown." LMAO! :D |
Mina Luriya chapter 4 . 7/10/2011 Oh Kakashi's personality just always makes my day. By the way, I enjoy the way you write. It's witty and intelligent, and I can actually tell what you're trying to say, which is very refreshing at the moment. |