Reviews for Served
x0xjaveetax0x chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
loved it was very good.
i-luv-24 chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
wow that was good, even tho it was wrote ages ago, i still thought id review.
stellaluna331 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
that was great. It really sounded like things they would both say.
AliciaFB chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
This was really well written and I could actually imagine them braking up like that. I know it wasn't supposed to be 'funny' or anything but somehow I found the end of the conversation with the "Back in LA, the fridge had probably just been opened"-part a little sarcastic. I liked it though.

This was a good beginning, I really hope you're going to continue!
Amy chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
I can see it going just like that. You wrote their emotions just how I would have pictured it. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
Sara-Girlie chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
It's been a while since I read the 24 fan-fic, and yours was the first one that I dived into this time...

Great job, not too over the top, believable, which is something that not a ton of people can pull off anymore...
linnlewis chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Wow.. you have to continue this fic! I love it
Joe's girl chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Good start. I hope you plan to continue. I'd like to read more.