|Reviews for Served|
| x0xjaveetax0x chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
loved it was very good.
| i-luv-24 chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
wow that was good, even tho it was wrote ages ago, i still thought id review.
| stellaluna331 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
that was great. It really sounded like things they would both say.
| AliciaFB chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
This was really well written and I could actually imagine them braking up like that. I know it wasn't supposed to be 'funny' or anything but somehow I found the end of the conversation with the "Back in LA, the fridge had probably just been opened"-part a little sarcastic. I liked it though.
This was a good beginning, I really hope you're going to continue!
| Amy chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
I can see it going just like that. You wrote their emotions just how I would have pictured it. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
| Sara-Girlie chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
It's been a while since I read the 24 fan-fic, and yours was the first one that I dived into this time...
Great job, not too over the top, believable, which is something that not a ton of people can pull off anymore...
| linnlewis chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Wow.. you have to continue this fic! I love it
| Joe's girl chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Good start. I hope you plan to continue. I'd like to read more.