Reviews for Break in the WeatherDarn Hunnigan! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hunnigan, you ruining the moment. I had laugh so hard about the conversation. plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me chuckle. While I like Leon/Luis, Leon/Ashley is a close second. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heheh. Nice. I love this pairing! It's the first time I've been so dissatisfied at the game ending *sigh* that I've been driven to fanfiction and so I have to wonder what the heck is lemons and limes? I love how you brought in a mention of the jacket. Plus, the comm conversation is hilarious. I know it's been years but please please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good overall. the lime moved just a bit too quickly: you could have gotten more out of it. still, nicely done. go for chapter 2 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great start .lol. O Love this bit -“At least now I have a personal purpose to get you somewhere safe.”- I mean the nerve .lmao. You soo gotta update! Just so yano I SO don't like Ada and the end of the game SUCKS! 1. Ashley wouldn't say that and 2. I so don't see why Leon still likes Ada the same Ada that didn't reali care if he or Ashley got blown up .lol. Like I say update soon! And sorry about the ranting above ~*-K-*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job...the kiss was a little rushed though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wicked man keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story! thats my fav re pairing, and this is almost the only one ive read. but i first read it about a year ago! you REALLY need to update, please |
![]() ![]() ![]() well at first i thought that ashley shouldve been the one who forced leon into a kiss. oh well. this was a highly entertaining fic despite being short. *chants* ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy-! I love it! Please continue. The 1st time I started to read this, I quit b/c of the "Ada can go to hell." thing, but now I'm glad I read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPdate please...this pairing does not have many fans...or stories to pick from...and I liked the Hunnigan connversation...it was cute... |
![]() ![]() ![]() youre story is great, hope you'll write the next chappie ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for an update on this, it's pretty good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should finish the story its seem really good plz update |