Reviews for Break in the WeatherDarn Hunnigan! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You must must must continue this very provacative story! It's very sexy and imagining Leon and Ashley having those pent up emotions is even sexier! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, I got a good laugh from this fic. I recently started RE4 and I love it! Nice job! Just to clarify some things...this story does make sense because Ashley is 18 and Leon is well in his mid-late 20's. He was in his early 20's in RE2 and received 6 years of government training afterwards. Also, I don't think Leon resents Ada, but she is a spy and a betrayer after all.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please! I can't take the suspense! *adds to favs* _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahah! omg great! XD That damn comm always does ruin everything XD like at the part where they hug (after she gets kidnapped. . ugh) they were interupted. gr. XD it made me laugh, hold my breath, and giggle at the thought of leon XD . nice job for a first. love it. You can't even tell. .- Alexie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you should do a sex scene and im looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update, the whole conversation with Hunnigan was hilarious, And I say go with the lemon-ness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Please continue. I say write the lemon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey that was good. I hope you continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hunnigan called at a VERY bad time! lol That "ohh, Four" quote cracked me up! I've always hoped that Leon and Ashley had the hots for eachother.. But I don't really think it would be a appropiate time to be "fooling around" when your in a place full of psycho blood thirsty villagers wishing to tear you limb from limb...but, oh well. Please update soon! Sincerely,Sakura-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol..sO funny. I really liked this fic. And I think AppleGirl64 is incorrect. Leon is by far 6 years older than Ashley, right? Should be correct. Anyway update please. -Rezie |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep it coming very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its a nice story but... You have many, many problems with your FanFiction, dear. 1. Leon is 21. Ashley is 20. Therefore, they count as the same age. 2. Did you proofread? 3. Leon does not hate Ada. I'm guessing you know that, but have issues. 4. Hunnigan is proffesional. Very proffessional. She would never say that. 5. I'd laugh SO hard at that "I drink window cleaner." line if it wasn't for the conventions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL..."oh, four"...funniest moment of the whole thing, hehe. Anyhow, nice job...glad we got some Leon/Ashley going on. _ |