Reviews for Break in the WeatherDarn Hunnigan!
Dark Shedevil chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
You must must must continue this very provacative story! It's very sexy and imagining Leon and Ashley having those pent up emotions is even sexier!
Animefreak0000 chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Great chapter! please continue!
Ashley Jo chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
plz continue
xSummonerYunax chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Haha, I got a good laugh from this fic. I recently started RE4 and I love it! Nice job!

Just to clarify some things...this story does make sense because Ashley is 18 and Leon is well in his mid-late 20's. He was in his early 20's in RE2 and received 6 years of government training afterwards. Also, I don't think Leon resents Ada, but she is a spy and a betrayer after all..
C'est Mort chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Update please! I can't take the suspense! *adds to favs* _
BotanFan chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Ahahah! omg great! XD That damn comm always does ruin everything XD like at the part where they hug (after she gets kidnapped. . ugh) they were interupted. gr. XD it made me laugh, hold my breath, and giggle at the thought of leon XD . nice job for a first. love it. You can't even tell. .- Alexie
Triggerhappy Sniper chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
I think you should do a sex scene and im looking forward to the next chapter.
tasteywheat chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Update, the whole conversation with Hunnigan was hilarious, And I say go with the lemon-ness!
Warrior of Virtue chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Interesting. Please continue. I say write the lemon.
Haru'sKitten chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Hey that was good. I hope you continue!
Dark Angelic Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Hunnigan called at a VERY bad time! lol That "ohh, Four" quote cracked me up! I've always hoped that Leon and Ashley had the hots for eachother.. But I don't really think it would be a appropiate time to be "fooling around" when your in a place full of psycho blood thirsty villagers wishing to tear you limb from limb...but, oh well. Please update soon!

Sincerely,Sakura-chan
staysmall chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
lol..sO funny. I really liked this fic. And I think AppleGirl64 is incorrect. Leon is by far 6 years older than Ashley, right? Should be correct.

Anyway update please.

-Rezie
animevideogame freak chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
keep it coming very interesting
Apple Girl G4 chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Its a nice story but...

You have many, many problems with your FanFiction, dear.

1. Leon is 21. Ashley is 20. Therefore, they count as the same age.

2. Did you proofread?

3. Leon does not hate Ada. I'm guessing you know that, but have issues.

4. Hunnigan is proffesional. Very proffessional. She would never say that.

5. I'd laugh SO hard at that "I drink window cleaner." line if it wasn't for the conventions.
perpetually-prototyping chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
LOL..."oh, four"...funniest moment of the whole thing, hehe. Anyhow, nice job...glad we got some Leon/Ashley going on. _
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