Sonar chapter 9 . 12/23/2010
That really just scared me considering ow seeing Ray in danger causes my gut to freeze nearly.
Sonar chapter 6 . 12/23/2010
That gave me a chill in my gut. Nicely done.
ReaderPal chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
this is great! I hated the 2nd movie and this is so muth better. Thanks a lot!
Andromache Welch chapter 2 . 3/15/2005
I started reading this fic, and I was thinking "this is exactly like the 2nd movie!" and I was gonna write (what I thought at the time to be) a really clever review pointing out the faux pas. Imagine how stupid I felt when i finally read the introduction! The moral is, always read the intro.

Anyway, I really, really liked it, and the idea was great. I hope to read more of your work in the future.