|Reviews for Hidden Intentions|
| McGrady chapter 5 . 10/7/2006
No seriously! I'll even do it again:
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW WEIRD THIS IS! I wrote a HieixBotan story entitled "Icha Icha" (yes, you are correct, it's taken from Naruto), and this chapter is like the mini version of what I have written so far. You wrote this over a year before I started writing my fic, so I hope you don't mind that I used the same idea! I thought I was the first one to think of it! Seriously, I didn't know you already used the "sexual healing" concept, and I REALLY hope you don't mind! My sincerest apologies!
This chapter and my story "Icha Icha" don't travel completely the same path - there are indeed many differences.
Well, anyway, I'm just happy that I found another HieixBotan fic! If you're still into YYH or still into HieixBotan, I shamelessly recommend my fic "Icha Icha" to you. I hope you like it.
Good job with this story!
| McGrady chapter 4 . 10/7/2006
You do a good job of conveying how difficultly Hiei is living in this chapter.
And the last chapter...
| McGrady chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
Quarantines are always interesting.
Interesting read! I'm on to the next chapter...
| McGrady chapter 2 . 10/7/2006
A few critiques:
1.) Whenever you have an ellipses ("..."), a comma shouldn't follow.
2.) The moods change quickly...maybe a bit too quickly. If you intend on fixing this story up at all, I'd recommend adding a lot of body language.
But still interesting! On to the next chapter...
| McGrady chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
Interesting first chapter!
| Aine of Knockaine chapter 5 . 3/12/2005
WOW when I said update soon, I didn't expect it to be this quick!
YAY! They had some good lovin' and fluff! (You know me I like naughty stuff!)
VERY NICE STORY! I can't wait to see what you come up with for V/M!
Okay I have to go and write some more!
| Aine of Knockaine chapter 4 . 3/12/2005
Oh' ge... **blush** I got a shout out!
Of course you know I'm all about 'naughty' versions (Great Hentai minds think alike!)
This is really good and I'm glad that you decided to write! Can't wait to see what's going to happen between the two.
You know the drill... update soon!
| Aine of Knockaine chapter 3 . 3/12/2005
Ya' know I never really thought of Botan and Hiei together... They do work rather nicely though. Brooding and bubbly... yup' opposites attract off to 4
| Aine of Knockaine chapter 2 . 3/12/2005
I love Hiei, he has such a bad attitude
So what bit him? Hm... the love bug? He... off to chappie three
| Aine of Knockaine chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Lookie what I found! ;o) YAY! Afternoon reading entertainment!
I like the start... off to read more
| Indecisive Mind chapter 4 . 3/12/2005
I really like this story. Could you please email me when you update it?
| Melky7 chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
awsome story! please update soon!