|Reviews for Not in My Village!|
| Ivy the panda chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
come here porky! :) i lolled so hard. cowinkydink i saw th movie huh? since im ivy...)
| Skye Mage chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
DO NOT tell me that Noah just died now! wait-was he pretending?
this was funny-when Ivy's all "Noah, can't you shut up!" and he not sounding retarded was epic. Seriously I don't think it is nice to make fun of his disability (not saying you are or anything and if you are-well then I no like that) but for some reason that made me laugh..
this was good! I didn't get the ending though
| E-Kiarlic chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Hahahahaha! Wow! Now if only the movie went like that! XD I'm going to pass this on to my friends so they get a good laugh too. Thank you for this awesome fanfic! XD
| Only Forever chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Ok, so let me start off by saying this scared me. I'd recomend a little grammer and spell check, but it really wasn't that bad. This fic... hm, how to put it. I didn't find everything all that funny... The "Chicken!" was good and the "Charolette will have to get over it" was funny too. Parts of it were a little mean, but it had its funny moments, though I didn't really like the ending. Did they really look that much like pigs though? And I think you mean aUtistic, instead of aRtistic, but maybe not.
| u suck chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
learn to spell, and find a sense of humor
| A reader chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Ha ha ha, okay, that was so hilarious! Great writing! My stepsister and I almost died laughing!
| TheAuthorRin chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
O_O...oh my god...i swear i was laughing SO HARD THAT I WAS CRYING and my ddad had to tell me to shut up a few times; oh my god that is so funny!
| OrangeSodaSpill chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
okay, im not trying to be mean here, but this story is really messed up. it has it's funny parts, but it seemed kinda pointless to me. some of the parts were kinda cruel (like about noah and stuff (and i think you meant autistic, not ARtistic)), but I respect that you put time and effort into it.
| Ana chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Wow it was a little...dimented...
| katja chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
that was awesome. totally twisted. keep writing
| darkprediction chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Hey, that was pretty funny! I think I'd get it more if I saw the movie.. lol. Um ,the only problem was the spelling mistakes.I know that's not a big deal, but I'm nit-picky sometimes.. although i can't really judge, can I? Well, I liked the clapping guy. "CHICKEN!" YAY
| PipMerry chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
That was really funny Jill. I liked it when she hit the tree and the retarted guy started to do his clapping thing. It was just so... um... let think Mr silveriaish. Please continue with this story.
| Wenham-Wonderer chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
I'm caught between laughter and backing away in fright . It was very good though ;)