|Reviews for Touch|
| Hadschi Halef Omar chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Just wanted to point a few details: in the movie, David doesn't wait an hour before Matt appears, he's brought straight into the interview room where Matt's waiting, and he realizes that Matt's blind from the white stick lying on the table, not because he heard him coming.
As for the slash angle - not my taste, and in this case, I think its forced, since I've never seen any indication of it in the movie.
But your general writing style is good.