Reviews for Spirits in the Future
Phillies2 chapter 23 . 2/27
Harry is just as bad as Dumbledore keeping the kids in the dark, as soon as he thought animugus he didn't go to the kids and say to keep an eye out. no he went to the order and said not nothing to lily or Millie. I'm surprised Harry's not following them with invisablity cloak, especially quidditch practice
Phillies2 chapter 22 . 2/27
There plan to go to the village was terrible, her changing her hair was smart, but Jordan going around the town shouting her name repeatably. Pretty sure Malfoy could have taken these kids at least 5 times by now
Phillies2 chapter 21 . 2/27
If I was Millie's Dad To Do List
1. Kill Percy for the 3rd time
2. Punch Snape
Manning for being a bitch
4. Kill Malfoy
5. Kill Percy again
Phillies2 chapter 20 . 2/27
Okay so Malfoy is the raven, and Harry did a terrible job of paying attention to his daughters where abouts. I feel like Harry would have shut down this manning girl a long time ago, she is the 2.0
Phillies2 chapter 19 . 2/27
I think Hermione and Ron's kid Cathy is weird and her shutting down her imagination just because it's in the Quibbler, kinda messed up. Sounds like Hermione is the mom who says Santa isn't real aka (a Killjoy)
Phillies2 chapter 18 . 2/27
I have come to the realization that there is only 1 solution in this story- Kill Percy
2. I think they should have obligated Malfoy of the fact he had a daughter and that Harry has her b4 he was sent to jail
3. Kill PERCY
Phillies2 chapter 16 . 2/27
Man do I hate Percy, He should have let Ginny deal with him saying it was a sibling feud, as long as no one dies. Should have also sicked molly and the twins on him, its hard for me to believe he is that high in the ministry anyway
Phillies2 chapter 15 . 2/27
I wouldn't have told her any of that other than he escaped. Harry would be a better man than me though in this story
Phillies2 chapter 13 . 2/27
I find it Hilarious what James was doing, but am a little surprised they haven't tried to communicate more yet
Phillies2 chapter 6 . 2/27
I love how James is like," How could he not give her the cloak? The injustice
mckertis chapter 1 . 8/19/2016
Award winning ? Cant imagine why.
AithusaRose chapter 26 . 4/30/2016
This is an amazing story! I'm glad I didn't stop reading it. I love all the attention you gave to their emotions. A lot of authors don't pay quite as close attention to them as I like. They were realistic and spot on to the character. I also really liked how you portrayed Draco. We know from the books that though he was not a very good person, he still had humanity. He couldn't kill Dumbledore, he didn't really want to be a Death Eater after he learned what it was like. He was a coward and a bully, but he never really sunk down to a pure death eater level. You made Draco still Draco. It's nice when you find characters that are still themselves, especially in stories like these. I think you're a very talented writer, and I look forward to seeing what else you've written.
Guest chapter 26 . 11/23/2015
Great fic
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
sisyphus1967 chapter 26 . 4/24/2015
I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. Thank you for sharing
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