|Reviews for Discomfort|
| Alli chapter 4 . 9/4
I LOVE your metephors. Words cannot explain because I do not have the ability you do.
| princess-j3ss chapter 4 . 12/21/2015
YES HELLO IT'S ME AGAIN (I really wasn't kidding when I said I was going to be reviewing all your stuff oh my god I'm so sorry but I can't /not/ review when I read something because I get too excited about it and I have to share that excitement with the world.)
I honestly loved this so much, what a horrible position for MirSan to be in but I enjoyed every moment of it so that's clearly what matters. AND WHEN SANGO'S NOSE ITCHED hahahah thanks for helping her out Miroku, you're a real pal. And their little heart to heart!
Also the 'nasty little knot' hahaha. I also really, really liked the first chapter and the way that you introduced everything, and the way that it was written and the tone.
AND MIRSAN SNUGGLES is honestly everything I have ever needed in this life.
I wasn't sure how this was going to resolve itself but IT WAS JUST REALLY WONDERFUL and I really enjoyed this and I am the biggest fangirl of your writing and I hope that you never stop writing MirSan, honestly.
| snoodlestrudel chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
Loved this! Great depiction of the characters! They were completely in character the entire story...and writing that wouldn't have been an easy task! It was also extremely witty and I laughed a ton.
| Shadow Cat17 chapter 4 . 3/15/2008
Wow! i really like the persofication that you gave to the plants and the wind tunnel!
| Rhapsidiast chapter 4 . 8/19/2007
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful! I love the touch of humour in this and you pinned down Sango and Miroku's personalities extremely well. I can also imagine this being in the canon, it really is a cute piece.
| J Luc Pitard chapter 4 . 7/29/2007
Nicely written. I like the style, despite its wordiness. A nice twist on the cliche. I like the mention of Ockham's Razor (I hadn't heard of The Law of Parsimony) and also the way Sango sealed his kazaana. Many good moments.
| Arhazivory chapter 4 . 7/4/2007
That was a great story. I love your writing style; it's very charming. ;)
| Nade-san chapter 4 . 5/22/2007
Great story, I loved it!
You really have a very special kind of writing... and I like it .
But, you know... I agree that men are, sometimes, very stupid. But you made poor Miroku looks so, so, so idiot P... He is not "that" stupid, I think...
Thank you for the fic, it was great!
| ilovekyosohma chapter 4 . 5/2/2007
i loved that! it was actually really good. when i first decided to read it, i figured it'd be interesting enough, maybe good for a laugh. but it was great! i thought it was cute. :). oh, and if you don't mind, can i say something in reply to your reply to Fantastical Queen? thank you. i told my current boyfriend i loved him( as a friend) a few hours after i properly met him, and that i loved him as a boyfriend only about i day after that. so maybe i just throw 'i love you's around more than you? whatever, sorry, i'm a total baka. please ignore. thanks for this fanfic, it was really fun to read!
| nickel1984 chapter 4 . 2/2/2007
| Mokusgirl chapter 4 . 1/14/2007
I love it! It was so full of suspence especially near the end. I actually thought they were gonna die. Anyway Great Job! It Was Awesome!
... Miroku Rules!...
| EmEx chapter 4 . 11/1/2006
LMAO! Seriously, this is one of the funniest, more clever fics I've ever read! You've got several smart and hilarious lines here! It is truly an awesome story. Thanks for writing it!
| kitsune-koinu chapter 4 . 9/11/2006
| anime09 chapter 4 . 8/25/2006
This story was so amazing! So hilarious too.
| Sarai D. Lee chapter 4 . 8/18/2006
I like this one!
Awh, it's just so adorable.
I love how you put the "hypothetical casual observer".
D It's hilarious.