Reviews for Discomfort |
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![]() ![]() I LOVE your metephors. Words cannot explain because I do not have the ability you do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES HELLO IT'S ME AGAIN (I really wasn't kidding when I said I was going to be reviewing all your stuff oh my god I'm so sorry but I can't /not/ review when I read something because I get too excited about it and I have to share that excitement with the world.) I honestly loved this so much, what a horrible position for MirSan to be in but I enjoyed every moment of it so that's clearly what matters. AND WHEN SANGO'S NOSE ITCHED hahahah thanks for helping her out Miroku, you're a real pal. And their little heart to heart! Also the 'nasty little knot' hahaha. I also really, really liked the first chapter and the way that you introduced everything, and the way that it was written and the tone. AND MIRSAN SNUGGLES is honestly everything I have ever needed in this life. I wasn't sure how this was going to resolve itself but IT WAS JUST REALLY WONDERFUL and I really enjoyed this and I am the biggest fangirl of your writing and I hope that you never stop writing MirSan, honestly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Great depiction of the characters! They were completely in character the entire story...and writing that wouldn't have been an easy task! It was also extremely witty and I laughed a ton. Bravo! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! i really like the persofication that you gave to the plants and the wind tunnel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful, absolutely wonderful! I love the touch of humour in this and you pinned down Sango and Miroku's personalities extremely well. I can also imagine this being in the canon, it really is a cute piece. Zant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely written. I like the style, despite its wordiness. A nice twist on the cliche. I like the mention of Ockham's Razor (I hadn't heard of The Law of Parsimony) and also the way Sango sealed his kazaana. Many good moments. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great story. I love your writing style; it's very charming. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I loved it! You really have a very special kind of writing... and I like it . But, you know... I agree that men are, sometimes, very stupid. But you made poor Miroku looks so, so, so idiot P... He is not "that" stupid, I think... Thank you for the fic, it was great! Read ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved that! it was actually really good. when i first decided to read it, i figured it'd be interesting enough, maybe good for a laugh. but it was great! i thought it was cute. :). oh, and if you don't mind, can i say something in reply to your reply to Fantastical Queen? thank you. i told my current boyfriend i loved him( as a friend) a few hours after i properly met him, and that i loved him as a boyfriend only about i day after that. so maybe i just throw 'i love you's around more than you? whatever, sorry, i'm a total baka. please ignore. thanks for this fanfic, it was really fun to read! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! It was so full of suspence especially near the end. I actually thought they were gonna die. Anyway Great Job! It Was Awesome! ... Miroku Rules!... |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO! Seriously, this is one of the funniest, more clever fics I've ever read! You've got several smart and hilarious lines here! It is truly an awesome story. Thanks for writing it! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so amazing! So hilarious too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this one! Awh, it's just so adorable. I love how you put the "hypothetical casual observer". D It's hilarious. |