|Reviews for Help!|
| Philomena Kuroi chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
| Revengeat3am chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
aw! gotta love nick/greg squishiness...:) i really loved the ending it ended the chapter perfectly..kinda a cliff-hanger and kinda a clean ending for the chapter. not bad for your first slash fic! ::two gigantic thumbs up::
| Anna chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Normally I'm not really into slash, blut this one is really good!I loved the ending, it was very cool. You should continue it, or maybe write another one?
| Lament chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
This is really good! I hope you'll continue. The one thing I would suggest is using dialogue tags a bit more often. In some places, I had to think about it to figure out who was talking. But anyway, great job!
| Sillie chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Heh, that was cute. :'3
| knuddel chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Oh, my fumbling Nick. I really like the end and I'm sure that Greg will ask for a second date. I can see him beaming after Nick's last sentence. So you HAVE TO write a second chapter!
That's a very sweet little story. What about a sweet long story?
| shacky20 chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Great chapter, really hoping that there will be a second part!
| lins chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
this was really sweet, I could imagine that happening between them. great job
| ScribbleDream chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E ending! It was very, very cute. I loved Nick's awkwardness, and Greg... well, he's always hott. Very lovely.
But, for your next fic (you'd better write one! :tries to act tough: :fails miserably:) I would add a little more details: feelings, surroundings, that sort of thing. Adjectives are your friend! But for a first slash fic, it was an enjoyable read. Good job!
| BabyAlyx96 chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
That was pretty good for your first slash fic! And ::snorts:: That ending? Loved it. Because, hee. Good job.
| jewelbaby chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
Good story can't wait for more
| Cuddy Cabin chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
Interesting...hm. I wonder what is going to happen?