|Reviews for I'm Ok The Missing Pieces|
| Obsessivebookdiva chapter 18 . 9/24/2013
Awesome job! Besides the language and the spelling here and there. Don't worry I have it too. Not the bad language of course but spelling. Dumb tree fell on my laptop:( anyway love the show thanks!
| 21XjumpStreetXrocks chapter 18 . 7/24/2011
I loved the story, I have been wanting to see a different side to this episode, I'm obbsessed with this episode, mainly due to the fact that Johnny Depp gets treated like a druggie, I also find it really sad and heartwarming that he muttered Penhall's name when Fuller and Hoffs came to get him, that shows how much he really cares, well rambling aside the story was good, i felt bad for Hanson having to go through withdrawl, but that's was made it realistic, unlike in the show where the next day he's fine.
| Above Water chapter 18 . 4/18/2011
This is really well done. I recently saw this episode and I really enjoyed it, but I totally agree that the writers really should have dealt with the traumatic side effects of Tom's ordeal in a continuing episode. It definitely seemed like it must have been at least three weeks between the hospital scene, and the final one. And you filled in the blanks perfectly. I know you wrote this a while ago, but it really holds up as a "missing episode." Good work! ;)
| crokettsgirl chapter 12 . 11/14/2010
I have to say that even 5 years later this story is very well done. The spelling is off but that doesn't matter because the plot is excellent. You do a brillant job with how a person goes through withdrawl, you nailed it! I think you have done a fantastic story and one I hope you were proud of when you finished it. I know I have more to go but I am so impressed by this. A lot of people just don't get withdrawl down right, the hallucenations of what happened to him the physical part too, done so well. People also write a tiny part and skip the rest bravo for you doing it all and showing how it really is...Again I am impress by this 5 year old story. I have seen withdrawl and been around mental hospitals, not as a patient and not state run ones. I see how the state ones could be like that being the last hope for people with nothing to cover their stay in a better place. I hope you get this and remember the story. Sue
| MoonlightMurder chapter 3 . 9/26/2009
I think your writing style is a bit confusing to understand. See, when you transfer what's going on with one character of the story to another, you don't make that transition apparent. Do you read? You should take note of how the story is written. What happens when the story skips from one character's point of view to another?
| fan33mj chapter 18 . 5/31/2009
WOW I loved this story. Glad to see everything turned out well in the end.
| where-is-my-tennant chapter 18 . 8/7/2008
this is wonderfully written. Hanson rulz!
| Procrastinatebyreading chapter 18 . 5/15/2008
ok...so not to be annoying or anything...but...are you going to ever write another jump street story? You really should! I am sure many others would agree!
I have enjoyed this one so much that I have actually read it more than once. I loved the whole recovery process and the way you had the characters interacting.
So basically I was wondering if you had anymore ideas floating in that wonderful brain of yours?...and that one day (hopefully very soon)...you might grace everyone with a new fic!
| stranded chess piece chapter 18 . 3/30/2008
Oh I have such a soft spot for this show, and you've done a great job with this! I agree, the episode left me wondering what happened with Tom between when he was 'rescued' and the final scene. Very enjoyable story! You've made me want to take a break from writing SPN fics and head to the land of Jump Street ;]
| Asher Elric chapter 18 . 1/8/2008
Please update. I like this and am planning one of my own but I want to get somewhere with Sweeney High first.
| andaere chapter 18 . 11/5/2007
I liked this story a lot! I actually didn't like the I'm Ok... episode at all (probably because Johnny Depp didn't look as hot as usual xD) but I liked this story a lot. You seem to be a person who writes angsty trageties and then the recovery process, so that's good, because I'm a big fan of the recovery process.
Anyway, I liked this story a lot, the characterization was perfect as well as the withdrawal or whatever it's called. Loved it all. And the funny moments too. So, good job! )
| Sushi Chi chapter 18 . 2/11/2007
Very awesome story. I liked it a lot. I love your writing stlye and the plot was fantastic. Thanks for writing it.
| Leanne chapter 18 . 10/30/2006
awesome story I loved it! I havent seen the episode of Jump Street it references yet but thanks to your great story I'm downloading it now. That story was so good! I like writing but I could never write as good as you. I hope to check out some of your other work soon. Keep Writing!
| Red Rose Production chapter 18 . 7/21/2006
You did it again. I couldn't stop reading this until I was done. I loved it. I hope you write more great storys.
| Spotluva chapter 11 . 5/21/2006
Wait a sec..."we're gonna get tis guy man..." i don't get it