Reviews for Music of the Soul
SamanthaMeloes chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
gingersnapdragon chapter 1 . 5/9/2007

thank you so much for doing something on Al!

i really think he deserves it too.
Mon Petit Pierrot chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
awesome story. you should write more, you're a really good writer
MusicalRileyChan chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
aw very sweet - good job!
Jade Pen chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
All in all, I enjoyed the story. Alphonse is my favored character, and I'm glad to see a fic more focused around him. Thank you for that. :)

This is just personal preference, but you may have wanted to either cut down on the lyrics for the first song, or increased the amount of other text (perhaps a bit more dialogue between the Elrics, to show that Edward's not really interested but Alphonse is?) As it is, the song takes up just a bit too much space, in my opinion.

Other than that complaint, though, you have a good story here, and I hope that you'll write more Al-centric fiction in the future. :)
sajala chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
wow that's really good! I really like Al pairings. i even did a fanfic on one but it's not done but i only have 2 more chapters and i plan on finishing them this weekend. if u wanna read it that is. Well i really liked the story and I hope u write more like it ok. buh-bye and o yea keep up the awesome work!
via-chan chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
yay!al al al al al al AL! _ LOVED IT!