Reviews for Moonlight thoughts
novasupernova chapter 3 . 12/6/2006
My GOD, you are a crazy genius. being able to come up with a story like GOD...
NarcissaxXxLucius-Love chapter 3 . 8/12/2005
PLZ Update Soon!
greendaygurl chapter 3 . 7/5/2005
COME ON! Its a good story...I mean i know Ari is a butt, but thst doesn't mean u should stop the story!
MaRtiNiArigirl chapter 3 . 4/26/2005
I LOVE Ur Story Its totally awesome I thiunk that Gibbs and Kate belong together, but i also am a kinda Ari fan so i love how they WERE together sorta its awesome continue plz!
Starlight chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
I've read some of your other stuff, and they're ok - if rather short - so I was pleased to find one of your longer fics. Oh, dear! That pleasure soon disappeared! This story was very disjointed, rambling and not very well written. It just didn't gel together, and half the time I was wondering what point you were trying to make. I couldn't even be bothered to read all of the last chapter, and I certainly won't be waiting for an update. You called this drama, but I think I've seen more drama on Nick Toons. You do humor quite well... maybe you should stick to that.
Kate chapter 3 . 3/21/2005
I'm sorry but this seems like two different stories. First there is the whole Kate/Gibbs and child angst with Gibbs facing life as a father and not knowing how to do it, or if he will do it well. But then there is suddenly another child and Ari. And everyone is suddenly very OOC. Ari isn't all that mean, just self centered. There is no way he could have full time custody of a child, doing what he does. And neither Gibbs nor Kate would ever let a child be taken from them.

Plus the whole thing was very confusing. I couldn't understand what was going on.
Navy Babe chapter 3 . 3/20/2005
*twitches* Can I kill Ari? Please? I really hope that you're going to continue with this story, cuz I have no idea what's going on! Interesting though...please continue?
orangeangel chapter 3 . 3/20/2005
You wonderful wonderful person. Im just soo happy that you have written another part to this story. Nice touch with the ari twist, but can he really do that to kate in like real life, the part bout taking kate to court and making sure gibbs wasnt proven to be the father? or were you just using your artist licence? anyway awesome story. i just love this story its soo sweet and everything.
orangeangel chapter 2 . 3/18/2005
Awesome! Ducky acting like a grandfather. awesome and gibbs words at the end. just wonderful. love it!
Christieanne-Anna chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
You should write more about how he handles everything.
Emsta chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
its good! but too short...
orangeangel chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
ok, is this a one shot, coz if it is, i like it, and you could certainly turn it into a story or something. But that is only what i think.