Reviews for In the Heat
Red red red ribbon chapter 21 . 9/12/2008
love it please please please please update soon please
Taeniaea chapter 21 . 3/27/2008
Great Story!
Lil Jean chapter 21 . 10/8/2006
Holy crap. SCREW YOU EMMA! JOTT WILL LIVE ON FOREVER! Ok, um, you really need to update soon!
The Evil Carlita chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
So good. I hope that I have the stamina to get through the... how many chapters are there again? A gazillion? hehe

-The Evil Carlita- of Newly Evolved
asitiswhenitwas chapter 21 . 9/27/2006
Don't hate on your transitional chapters I rather like them.

Looking foreward to the war, now that the cadence to arms has been sounded.

I am a bit saddened that my beloved Madelyne Pryor won't be involved, ah well.

Keep up the good work.
Ballmaster chapter 21 . 9/25/2006
WAR ! YAY! Lol. Nice chapter:)
41eugoR chapter 21 . 9/25/2006
Dirty war, huh? Where there’s Emma there’s bound to be dirt ;-) Can’t wait to read the next chappie so update ASAP!
Wen1 chapter 21 . 9/24/2006
oh man, when Jean will know it she'll feel betrayed and her powers will come back I guess MUAHAHAHA for EMMA


carry on

strayphoenix chapter 21 . 9/24/2006
I'm going to make myself a shirt that says "Team Grey" and wear it around until you update.

I just have one little thing, I love your story (especially the emma/rachel humor ("dodge the lightning bolt" *snicker*)) but i think that the character's reactions to jean coming back were a little too watered down. It would've been fine in the comic universe when a dead person comes back every other month but not so much for Evo. Other than that, amazing job!


("Scott’s future wife and the basic reason I’m alive?" *snicker*)
DOJ chapter 21 . 9/23/2006
HAPPY BIRTHDAY sometime in this past three weeks...

My favorite characters from this chapter:

1. Rachel - the little bit with Emma at the end was great _

2. Tabitha - how can you *not* love her? And you write her so well _

3. Pietro...I don't want to say that you "humanized" him this chapter...but you showed a side of him that isn't usually portrayed...and I loved the spark between him and Rachel

4. And Lance - just because _

I could go on and on about how much I LOVED this chapter...but I sadly don't have much time...just know that I was so excited for this update! I greatly missed the Jottness :(

whylime chapter 21 . 9/23/2006
Hey congrats on the social life!

Also congrats on another lovely chapter.

I really think the part about scott having his memory erased was really weird and a little ooc for both him and the prof. But it did make for a good scene at emma's return.

Can't wait to see the cat-fight and what happens when Magneto returns from whatever he's off doing.
tears013 chapter 21 . 9/23/2006
Another awsome chapter, and your not the only one who hates writing transitional chapters. The others chapters that suck to write are introductions...I hate them.
darkpheonix52 chapter 21 . 9/23/2006
Is Rachel going to hook up with Pietro? I totally loved how Rachael was acting when Emma came back! Update soon!
Redd Eyez chapter 21 . 9/23/2006
I love the jott and lancitty in this chapter- it's so sweet! The alone time that Jean and Scott had with each other was pretty good too ;) but rachel's time with her mom was the best. I can't wait to read how Jean and Emma fight with each other over Scott. But of course Jean will win ) UPDATE!

Jott 4Ever!
digi-gal-rox chapter 20 . 9/21/2006
as a big fan of x-men, i luv this! even though i hate the character emma frost, i still luv x-men! pls update soon! can't wait to see what happens next!... and i can't help wonder if the returned jean is actually pheonix or not, like it was mentioned in the comics and the x-men 3 movie... hmm... something to think about... keep up the good work, and update fast pls!
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