Reviews for Oh
BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Aww. Poor Summer. I love the way you wrote this with the parenthesis and everything. I like this, it was sad and sweet and just really great.
housecrazed1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
this annoyed me. it was hard to read because of all the oh's. i think maybe if you had made this into a longer story it would have been awesome but it was still pretty good
Niji o Tsukinuketa chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
That was horribly sad.

You're just describing characters and how they think.

And all your fics are unbelevibly short.


All I can say, is like...


I'm not sure. But Writing Class would be a good help.

~Momiji (Or Botan, whatever you wanna call meh!)
Eithersyffe chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
This is not a fanfic. It's just describing characters. It's horrible.
Brightly75 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Very very nice. Captures the moment quite well, and the prose is just evocative.
Paige Fan chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
I had to read this a few times to get it. I'm still a bit confused... it this SethRyan? I wasn't sure. Anyway, its good, try to make it a bit clearer nex time.
Ebony Dear chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Definately my most favorite writer on here. I always love your work.
Mrs.AdamBrody chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
That was so good! I feel sorry for Summer though. Loved it!
Chrismukkah-hunnie chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
Aw.. That was soo awesome! I love the way you wrote that, with all the Ohs.

Oh. (He can’t love her, not really, not if he can kiss Ryan like that.)

that is an awesome line! Loved it!

I love your writing its the best! Keep it up!