Reviews for A Quiet Moment
Natalie chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
I read it.
Jim Horns chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
Not exactly what I expected to read, but since it has been written all the way back in good old 2000, it's alright. Slack has been cut, for sure.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Cute. I love Harry/Hermione fics!
Random number generator chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
Oh dear. "My first attempt" is clear, that is a wall of text.
Kamratbambi chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Fairly short story but shows a normal day (lesson) in Harry's life. In this story, you should consider dividing the text into paragraphs to make it easier for readers to follow the story. It's in the whole a good first attempt. also considering the young age you were when you wrote this. It will be interesting to read more fanfiction you have written and see your development in writing. )
riddle1rave chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
That was soo adorable! Loved it!
harrypotterobsession chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Believe it or not, when you write stories your meant to use paragraphs. It breaks it up a bit and actually keeps the reader interested.
Enji86 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Nice and sweet.
141fanficfan chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I'm a little late coming to this story, but then I am late at everything.

Loved it. Short, but that's exactly what it should be. You said all that should have been said.
Chelle-Marie Mcgonagle chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
pretty good you could use with some more paragraphing though. one paragraph just makes a person not want to read it.
MoonyandProngs chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
That was good. I liked it.
Pharies chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
That was sweet. I really liked it. Private moments are the best.

Matt Likes Argyle chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
Dude, it does really show a typical day with Harry. It's cool that it's so short and yet could gt some real..thing, across.


The thing is good.

And I don't know what I just typed so I'll just be like

omG taht wuz god! u r teh awesom!11!eleven!
MasterMenthe chapter 1 . 8/9/2007

Wow, when did you write THIS? It's... well, not good, but not bad either! Have you always had a talent for writing, or was this just a fluke that worked itself out when you were younger?
q.thews chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Plausible and nice.
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