Reviews for Forbidden Dance
CC.Hawkeye chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I LOVE YOUR HISTORY...and you make me cry XDDD
GeMikanXIII chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
That was so...BEAUTIFUL! TT

I loved it to bits!

Great job! _
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 1 . 11/1/2006

but what about the day after?

I want more romance!
ShikamaruHatake chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
That was the best song-fic i've ever read. normally i hate song-fics, but you made a REALLY good one. this is so going on my favorites.
pinoykengumi7 chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Eheheh the song which you used caught my eye. It's very nice how you incorporated the lyrics to the fic; I hardly see good songfics, hence I normally never read them.

Hehehe it's a nice sweet oneshot, and I like it But one question: how come all if it is in italics?

Also, in the ninth paragraph, the first sentence seems to have a bit of a mistake - Roy pulled Riza closer to him, suddenly, so that their bodies were neatlycoresspondentto the steps of the dance. -

In any case, it's still good; nothing major that disrupted the fic. Good going~

-duckii mustang-
white epitome chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
aww! that was cute!
Ritz the freak chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
I love this fanfic. It really shows that Riza is a girl!
kimmy TurCha chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
OMG i loved it great oneshot, and the song, great pick really good fic. Royia all the way! .
fightingcomet chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
that was so sweet...i love your song fics, they're the best!
Cashmeritan chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Ou! Beautiful.
Cutie Blossom chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Lol! Go Riza! Go Riza! A girl has to keep her man in line. :P
lovelyslickyvixen chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
WanderingWonder chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Awe! Cute!
A Different Life chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Mimi-san chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Very interesting! Nicely done... I saw a picture with Riza in a red dress once while browsing around FMA image galleries... I thought the color completely suited her..._ Great job!
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