Reviews for The One I Love
Guest chapter 8 . 3/16/2016
I usually like your stories, expect for two. This one and Deal with the Devill, tea is portrayed as a complete imbecile. She is the only one to blame for the poor situations she has landed in. Her naivety is so annoying and frustrating that at times I hope she loses everything for being so dumb. I'm glad your others stories are so much better. I do like the plot and the conflicts, but when you read the first chapters, nobody really forced her to marry Kaiba so soon. Her father didn't really threaten to do anything to Marik nor to her. He just sternly told her no and she agreed. That's it. I think there was something missing there to show why Tea had to choose to marry Kaiba.
andjelija.nenic chapter 5 . 1/30/2016
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Bockibear chapter 12 . 1/25/2014
I loved it! Great story! Keep writing stories for this pairing! I love them!
Seto and Tea Fan chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
Well there you go everyong got what they deserved. However, I was just hoping you could have put at least one scene where Tea tells Serenity and Mai off or maybe have had her kick them out of her house. That would have so enjoyable, but at least Seto finally cut them out. So that's good and acceptable.
Seto and Tea Fan chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
Yup, even though I saw all this coming and it still did not make it any less harsh.
Seto and Tea Fan chapter 9 . 5/13/2013
AAHH! I really dislike Tea and the way she thinks. She keeps creating more problems for herself and giving Marik more ammunition to use towards Seto. See lies and secrets will always come back and bite you in the butt. If or when Seto gets mad at her, she can only blame herself.
Yet, I hope she still kicks Marik's a$$ for interrupting her awesome new like. It's like dude get the message she don't want you no more and move on.
OK gonna keep reading to see how you gonna fix this. It's like watching a spanish soap opera. I love and hate them.
Seto and Tea Fan chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
Okay I'm conflicted with how I feel about your story. First of all, I love the plot. I was imagining a type of "novela" occuring. You know, damsel having to sacrifice herself to help or protect the forbidden love and then having to deal with the forced upon beast of husband (yet surprisely handsome and dashing). I love those type of stories.
However, the portrayal of Tea is difficult to accept. There was no real reason to marry Kaiba. Her father didn't threaten, blackmail, or truly manipulate her to reach this decision. There was no conflict, she just agreed because her daddy said so. She came out looking like a weak, cowardly, self-made victim. She gets credit for partially telling Kaiba about how she feels. bit still she lacked character.
Then there are the brothers, why is Mokuba marry arranging a marriage for his brother and Seto just goes along without doing his research. He is Seto Kaiba, does not trust anyone nor likes anyone just because someone else says so. Not even for his little brother.
Frankly, I don't think she deserves anyone of them at this point. She just didn't have a true conflict, maybe I just jumping the gun here, but I didn't see it.
I'm gonna check out the next chapter and then see what's going on, but I'm not sure yet.
Pigtails5 chapter 2 . 2/24/2012
good so far. but the plot reminds me of an Indian movie "dhahkan".
Crissytje chapter 12 . 12/7/2010
Sappy ending but I'm glad everything went well. Poor Marik though, Tea just forgot him like that:(

Crissytje chapter 10 . 12/7/2010
{"You lied to me all those years. } years? They're only married for 6months. You said it yourself ...
Crissytje chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Hmm Seto was really kind if OOC, he seems a complete other person. He's whiney, he listens to Moki ( does almost everything he says, and since when does Moki the younger brother decides a bride fr his older brother), according to Tea he is different because he doesn't boost his power and money... Helllooooo? This is Seto were speaking of? He is like the nr one booster? He's kind of a bit to soft:( it's really pity because the plot sounds really fun. Oh well I'll see how it proceeds.
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 12 . 9/5/2010
i am so glad that they are together and they are going to have a little cute baby. at last...peace and love in the Kaiba family.

keep the good work!

browneyes730 chapter 12 . 4/2/2010
great job.:D
jessi chapter 12 . 3/28/2010
Thanks for the great story!

You are a really talented writer!
reko1620 chapter 12 . 2/21/2009
Thanks for the story :)
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