Reviews for The One I Love
Black Rose Witch chapter 11 . 8/29/2005
i love this story write another chapter real soon. I still am wondering what seto will do next wil he go back after kibaor will his pride get in the way?
Gauri92 chapter 11 . 8/29/2005
thth was gud!
Metalmark chapter 11 . 8/28/2005
Whoa. So it was really Seto's stepfather who was behind the whole ordeal. Didn't see that coming now. Great chapter and keep on writing. I can't wait to read what's going to happen.
me chapter 11 . 8/28/2005
AWESOME!

that was the best chapter YET!

YAY!

love the fic!

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
panmotto chapter 11 . 8/28/2005
Gozoburro is alive and now wants his company back! I sure hope that Kaiba can manage to get out of this mess. Update asap!
Inuyoukai-san chapter 11 . 8/28/2005
AH!

Bakura: Ow! My ears!

Shizuka: I think I got over the fact that I'm a whore...sniff...

Inuyoukai-san: WHAT A CRUEL CHAPTER!

Bakura: I HATE INUYOUKAI-SAN'S REVIEWS!

Inuyoukai-san: sniff...WHY DO YOU HATE ME BAKURA?

Shizuka: sniff...Why can't I become a hero? sob...

Bakura: Because life is cruel and the author prefers Tea instead of you...

Shizuka: BAKURA NO BAKA! (Bakura you idiot)

Inuyoukai-san: Oh geez thank's again Bakura no baka! (glares)

Bakura: OH F%#K YOU ALL! AUTHOR YOU ARE THE ONE THAT CAUSE MY TORTURES SO I ORDER YOU TO UPDATE!

Inuyoukai-san: YAY! My plan to make Bakura go insane has worked! HIGH FIVE SHIZUKA!

Shizuka: YEAH!

Bakura: O.O
isissparklz chapter 11 . 8/28/2005
Lol! I love how you ended the chapter:"Make your move or it'll be check mate for you." I love that ending! It's really unique. Hmm I wonder how kaiba is going to make it all work again? He's a genius..I'm sure he'll get something. Well see ya! I love your story .
Chained and Tortured chapter 11 . 8/27/2005
O.O

OK

NO Noah. That's fince cuz Gozaburo was my secound guess. UPDATE SOON!
drkmagiciangrl25 chapter 10 . 8/19/2005
Great chapter. Please update soon!
lovers foul chapter 10 . 8/19/2005
no seto! please update soon
Inuyoukai-san chapter 10 . 8/17/2005
Inuyoukai-san; (CRYING MY F%#K &G HEAD OFF)

Bakura; oO Oh shit and this is what i get for being loved? Count me out!

Shizuka(serenity); I'm...I'm...I'M A WHORE IN THIS STORY! WHY O WHY?

Inuyoukai-san; sniff...It's...sob...It's okay shiz...sniff...We all know you're real personality!

Bakura; (messaging head) A loud bitch...

Shizuka; (STARTS CRYING HEAD OFF)

Inuyoukai-san; Oh geez...thanks (glaring at Bakura)

Bakura; please update soon so these bitchs can shut up!

Inuyoukai-san; But I'm born a bitch! see Inu is japanese for Dog and...(starts yating nonstop)

Bakura; PLEASE!
Chained and Tortured chapter 10 . 8/17/2005
Ooh, is that HUNK Noah involved? *Gets hit over the head* OUCH!

Kaiba: HE'S TRYING TO STEAL MY COMPANY!

Cat: *Rubs head* YEah... isn't he just dreamy?

Kaiba: (X_X) No.

Cat: *Stars in her eyes* Well I think he is. I think he's above HOT I think he's sexilic-

Kaiba: *Hand on cats's mouth* STOP RIGHT THERE!

Cat: *Blink*

Kiba: I LOVE YOU!

Cat: (X_X) What?

Kaiba: I was talkling to the Tea plushie.

Cat: (_) As long as it's not me. UPDATE SN PLZ!
troubledgrl101 chapter 10 . 8/16/2005
*gasp* this was a real good chapie! cant wait till the next up the good work :)

troubledgrl
Metalmark chapter 10 . 8/16/2005
Its Noa, isn't it. That has to be it since he's the only son of Gozubora Kaiba. Just when I thought one problem was out of the way another shows up. Great twist. WEll great chapter and keep on writing. bye.
seto'sfan001 chapter 10 . 8/16/2005
Me:HOLY CRAP UPDATE IF YOU LOVE ALL OF US!

Benny:oh lord this is a good story.*eats popcorn*

Me:BENNY YOUR SUPPOSED TO BEG WITH ME AND ASK FLASHCHIMP TO UPDATE THE STORY DAMN YOU!

Benny:Well sorri but thats your job *leaves the room*

Me:NO WAIT COME BACK BENNY, OH DAMN IT! just plz update the story soon! O.O'
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