Reviews for His Doom Regrets!
Tugera chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
Are you gonna write any more on this or is that the end? It doesn't seem like an end... I hope you write more... sounds interesting.
Xerio chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
A little different to my normal reading (i don't much read what doesn't stay true to the original cartoon) but good as it is. try to tone down the swearing, or do like the angry beavers, invent a new word... spoot.. at any rate i've got the same problem with fics, i've got this fully sick ending to my SHINY METAL OBJECTS OF DOOM story, but i can't write it for some reason. every time i write it comes out... sucky. But don't stop with Defective, it's a good story, just rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite rewrite and get it good.