Reviews for Living without Danger |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this series really is very well-written I have some problems about the deus ex machina plot devices thrown around willy-nilly but the interactions between the characters are very Charming plotting is fun and of a good pace overall it's a very fun read |
![]() ![]() ![]() nothing wrong with it but I find it kind of funny that you mention that snakes are technically death in respect to Parseltongue but mention that the snake is going to hunt by the sense of smell alone when they have infrared sensing capabilities that are frankly phenomenal |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. It was great. Thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() Loved this story! Thank you ever so much for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() 1 for the Hypocrisy Agreement :-D |
![]() ![]() Here's something to make it even worse. Quirrell polyjuiced as Lockhart, because Lockhart's too in love with himself to notice anyone else |
![]() ![]() Professors Quirrell and Lockhart were unfortunately unable to rejoin us here at Hogwarts for another school year..." Dumbledore paused to allow the snickering to die down. They both died gruesome deaths here at safe old Hogwarts, your new professor killed one and the other might have been shredded by a misunderstood doggie. Info control much? Actually I am enjoying your story. Thanks |
![]() ![]() I expected more information on the...Remus is not a werewolf...thing but apparently not gonna get it yet. Still involuntarily transforms. Without wolfsbane or Danger would probably still be mindless beast. And apt to kill people. Just maybe not contagious? Not that the contagious thing could be proven. Still sounds like a werewolf. Anyway, good story. Thanks |
![]() ![]() I ️ your work. Especially having Percy possessed instead of just Ginny. Great thinking! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, this is NOT going well- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gee it's great, this story is finished so I won't tell you to update soon. I liked the part where Ron's jewel glowed, and I'm excited to find out precisely what that means. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That "lion's son calls eagle's daughter sister" line is a tad misleading, I like it! Because Remus does say he and Letha are like siblings but people could also take it to mean Harry and Meghan, beautiful! |
![]() ![]() I was so surprised that Padfoot AND Hermione were petrified. Love the chapter and the story. |
![]() ![]() Someone mentioned crying over Siss in an early review... My immediate thought was oop me too. Dang that was sad. At first I was like 'she could only be petrified...' And then no. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read LwoD three times through now. While I think it's a little too married to the "stations of canon," there are some really stellar parts. Everything about Siss, Harry befriending Sangre, the Pride establishing their group dynamics, Sirius and Aletha as DADA profs. I think LwoD thrives when the story is significantly different from canon. I also am continually amazed at how many threads you manage and weave. And I know that the stories will only get more complicated and more crowded (in a good way!) with time. Pretty much any time you start a section with just pronouns, not someone's name, my thoughts start spinning to figure out which bit of the narrative you're teasing out. I look forward to continuing this reread journey. |