A snake! You have me sobbing into my plate. over.a snake! Tears running. down my face. You made me care... Grumble, grumble, darn good writers

"It's called a Sorcerer's Stone." ... *sighs in Canadian*

The alpha transfer of power is interesting to watch. Well deserved, though, since that was a big mess up on Harry's part.

Oh, now that's cute. Harry is the happiest person alive. I feel bad for Draco, but better he learn through a connected dream than in the physical world.

Finished book one and jumped right into book 2 I was worried I wouldn’t like it as much but I was wrong. Wonderful. So glad you wrote and shared this.

First off I do NOT trust Dudley.

Second Neville is a blood heir!

Third I can't wait to come back and read more!

Take care!

wow Harry what the heck?

Beautiful! Delicious! Exquisite!

I just realized that both the first and second books in this series have the same acronym. How do you tell them apart if they're in the same sentence?

I hope the noodle incident is whritten in a one-shot.

I hope you aren't using foreshadowing with Harry's dream...

Hhmmm...just wondering - what happened to their other house, the one where the dementor attacked? Also - why didn't Draco's mom put MANY personal things into Draco's Black's trust vault so that he would have some tangibles?

Isn’t October 31 Sir Nicholas’s death-day? In CoS, the trio ditch the Halloween feast to go to his party. I guess he only cared to hold a party for the 500th anniversary of his death and not the 499th?

So far, I like your story but IMO they behave too animalistic. They are humans

Honestly, taking away 150 points for defending a fellow student from bullying is beyond stupid and incredibly frustrating. Mcgonagall is indirectly telling others that defending your friends and fellow students is more or less "wrong." It doesn't matter how many people were involved, and even gives more "moral points" in Draco's favor because he stood up for his friend against 10 people. There are better ways to punish them than to ostracize almost their entire house against them, and indirectly telling the Slytherin students that what they did wasn't wrong. Last comment on this, were any of the Slytherin students punished?

I love this