I've seen GG only recently and when I decided to see what was ff world's take on it, your stories were the only ones that sucked me right in. A pity you didn't finish either of them. You have a great writing style and an excellent understanding of characters

I love your version of what was going on with Rory and Logan. You make them so much more complex and beautiful.
Come back and finish. There are people that want to read this to completion.

It is sad that you're not completing these incredible stories.

That was so good, sad it isn't finished.

You can't see me, but I'm sitting here in a huff, with my arms crossed, because I wanna know what now genius!?

ahhhh its soo good! you most def have a way with words! are we ever going to learn about the lesson? and hwat happens? who folds first?

ahh i loves it! it made me wanna go watch youtube! ;)

ahhh GREAt beginning!

please update

beautiful

I wish they would allow more than one review per chapter because every time I read this I feel like I have something new to say.

You have them both freaking down. It is rare to find some one who can truly articulate tv characters on paper, but damn you've got it. The sex and the restraint it is just so good!

More please?

hello!

i was wondering if you plan to continue this story. its fantastic. i've read quite a few fic that describe in depth the beginnings of rory and logan's relationship and i must say you're one of the few writers who capture the true essence of their obvious chemistry. i admit that during my initial read, i didn't get most of the gist. being english as my second language, i need to re-read each sentences to really comprehend your thoughts.

anyway, the writing is definitely remarkable. i wish i have the ability to weave a wonderful story. for now, im quite content with reading and reviewing. here's hoping you continue with this.

an update will be greatly appreciated. cheers!

Good God.

This is how fanfiction should be. I can't find words to tell you how much I love this story. Everything is just perfect. I beg you, please update this! Its to good not to be.

You know what would be a great Christmas present? For you to update this and/or The Point of Being Young. They are two of the most amazing stories I have ever had the privaledge to read and I am desperate for more. Please.

it was a great story! but i like all your writng. I like how you have alot of metaphors in your writing! keep it up! update soon!