Reviews for A Wicked Tale
inredrainboots chapter 8 . 3/17/2013
It's over. . . *bawls in a corner* Okay, not really, but it was good, and now I am going to read your other stories and leave you more pathetic comments like this one!
inredrainboots chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
I'm not sure if the story is completed, but if it isn't, please update it, it's been like 7-8 years, and I don't want it to end so soon as I know it will. You just followed my story (thank you for that, by the way, it means a lot) so I know you still exist.
I've never even thought to look up Buffy the Vampire fan fiction. Probably because I've only seen maybe a bit more than the first season, but this fan fiction is so good I don't care if it ruins a bit of the show for me. I don't think it'll ruin anything either, so yeah.
And, as you said, geez Angel was just a terrible person in this chapter. Poor Nina.
Mizu.no.Oujo.1967 chapter 8 . 10/27/2012
I hope you decide to update again. This is a really great story. I love it so far! Hope you write again. :D
Sinangeled chapter 8 . 5/25/2011
Reread this story and remembered how much I love it. I would love to read more...Are you planning on returning to this fic? It would be really amazing... :)
NeonCity86 chapter 8 . 4/23/2011
YESS CONTINUE even if its been six years!

you're just getting to the good stuff
isugirl chapter 8 . 12/18/2010
are you going to continue with this story?
tvdtwilight101 chapter 8 . 11/17/2010
This is amazing! :D
vaantje chapter 8 . 8/25/2010
i hope you'll get your insperation back for the story because i like it of course i like buffy and angel/us and now other pairing infolving does two. so i hope in some twisted way you'll give them a happy end
dkwr07 chapter 8 . 8/24/2010
great story. hope you update soon.
ButterflyGurly chapter 8 . 5/18/2010
I really love this story and want an update. I've never beta'd before, but I would be willing to help you out with grammar, spelling and such. Please please please update this story.
SharkGurl chapter 8 . 5/9/2010
Could you please continue this awesome story?
LaraLumos chapter 8 . 4/29/2010
An advice: Get a Beta. There are plenty that wouldn't mind giving you a help.
I noticed several grammatical mistakes in your story. I'll show you some that particularly stood out:

You write "ho" when I think that what you meant to say is "Oh" and "ha?" when it should have been "huh?".
You misspelled several times "deferent" - it's different; "defiantly" - it's definitely; "seamed" - it's seemed, and so on and so forth..

I understand that English isn't your first language - it isn't mine either - but that doesn't justify mistakes that could be easily corrected with Microsoft Word or something.

Other than that, you do write well and your stories are quite interesting (I do love Angelus personality).
I know that sometimes is hard to know if you're using the correct verb and all of that, but you're doing alright. :)

Keep it up
Lara
BS chapter 8 . 3/28/2010
PLEASE, CONTINUE WITH STORY. I REALLY LIKE IT.
clandestinequeen chapter 8 . 12/23/2009
Your doing a really good job with your story, a pity it hasn't been updated in a long time because you seem to have such an interesting plot and I would have loved to see how it panned out.

Also even with the language barrier, I think you get your story across perfectly. :)
clandestinequeen chapter 7 . 12/23/2009
Poor Angelus's plan backfired with trying to make her jealous even if she did feel a little inferior. hah hah, amusing, indeed! In step Parker.
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