|Reviews for First Flight Big Troubles|
| Chocolate And Croissants chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Just finished reading this fic. I love it. Is there a sequel planned? Oh, please, let there be! Or I'll give you puppy-dog eyes!
| SmilodonFatalis4aol.com chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Wow this is really good so far. Keep up the good work and i cant wait till the next chapter.
| Aiva chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Hi :-) One of my all time favourite fanfics authors here! Great!
Liked the story way too much, so much that did try to write my own story as well about the Dir.. khm, Lovely Angels.
Will you be so glad as to allow me to translate story to my mother tongue, please?
| S.Hagen chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
Could not find your e-mail to reply to you, so I'm just adding another review. Thanks for your comment, and I have no plans for anything resembling a sequel to this story, sorry, but I have written other DP stories.
| Mike256bit chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
I really liked it! I kinda want a better payoff, meaning that I'm asking for more. Let's see a sequel - if not of the same vein, at least give us another adventure. The dialogue is a *little* flat, as you don't really imply inflections, and it could stand a few more question marks. Nice diction. Good job, sport.