Reviews for Language of Love
spacekitten2700 chapter 13 . 9/20
sweet
MissGleeLover chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
I Loved it ... there's just one little thing ... i don't mean to offend you but the Spanish is very very poor and this translation is not accurate
Jaden Yuki's Little Sister chapter 13 . 12/9/2006
THOSE WERE SO ROMANTIC I LOVED EVERYONE OF THEM! WRITE MORE!
TV Angel 711 chapter 12 . 9/25/2006
Great chapter and great stories. but some of the words were written wrong. Here are the correct words for Give me just one night (Una Noche)

Your lips keep telling me you want me

Hold me close all through the night

I know! that deep inside you need me

No one else can make it right

Don't you try to hide the secret

I can see it in your eyes

You said the words without speaking

Now I'm gonna make you mine!

Give me just one night, una noche!

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night, una noche!

I'll give you the time of your life!

(The time of you life, oh)

(I'll give you the time of your life)

(Oh baby yeah!)

Your eyes of passion make me crazy

your existence makes me wild

I wanna loosen up your feelings

see what's hiding inside

Just give me one night, una noche!

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night, una noche!

I'll give you the time of your life

(the time of your life oh ooh yeah)

(oh baby)

Aye que rico [m how good]

me pone loca [you make me crazy]

como te mueves [how you move]

como me toca [how you touch me]

tu movimiento [your movement]

tu sentimiento [your feeling]

si yo te quiero [yes I love you]

te doy la noche [I give you the night]

toda la noche [all the night]

Aye, vamos! [Let’s go!]

Give me just one night!

(Give me one night baby)

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night

(Ahh Just one night ohh baby)

I'll give you the time of your life

(I'll give you the time of your life)

Give me just one night
SuperCellist chapter 8 . 7/27/2006
You're a great author! I can't stop reading these stories! I love them as much as Olivia and Elliot love each other (and that's a lot).

The only thing I don't like is that there are too many exclamation marks. It kinda sounds like the narrator is hyper or something. Yes, punctuation is the salt to a story's meat, but too much of one thing is no good (at least that's what my mother says).

Never stop writing!
onetreefan chapter 13 . 4/18/2006
this whole set of song fics was simply AMAZING! i loved every one! great great job! i can't believe it! they were all awesome. great stuff.

onetreefan
TV Angel 711 chapter 13 . 10/1/2005
Wow! I like all of this story. Althought I would like to give you the correct words to "Give Me Just One Night (Una Noche)" by 98 Degrees. Here they are (including the translation of the Spanish female solo bit...OK you probably already know the translation but when I found the lyrics, it came with the english translation in parenthesis):

Your lips keep tellin' me you want me

Hold me close all through the night

And I know

Deep inside you need me

And no one else can make it right

Don't you try to hide your secrets

I can see it in your eyes

You said the words without speaking

Now I'm gonna make you mine

Give me just one night

Una noche

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night

Una noche

I'll give you the time of your life

The time of your life

Your eyes of passion make me crazy

Your existence makes me wild

I wanna loosen up your feelings

And see what's hiding inside

Give me just one night

Una noche

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night

Una noche

I'll give you the time of your life

The time of your life

(Spanish girl)

Aye que rico [m how good]

me pone loca [you make me crazy]

como te mueves [how you move]

como me toca [how you touch me]

tu movimiento [your movement]

tu sentimiento [your feeling]

si yo te quiero [yes I love you]

te doy la noche [I give you the night]

toda la noche [all the night]

Aye, vamos! [let's go!]

Give me just one night,give me one night baby

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night,give me one night oh baby

I'll give you the time of your life

Give me just one night

Una noche

A moment to be by your side

Give me just one night

Una noche

I'll give you the time of your life

The time of your life

Keep up the good work!
LandofShadows chapter 13 . 8/27/2005
Let's play Jeapordy! What is "Second to the Bottle"? Teehee...I lurved it! One thing-the crying in baseball line fits, but saying it's halftime really didn't make sense, but seventh inning stretch would've worked. Anyhoo, awesome...
lilinsanepeople chapter 13 . 8/27/2005
loved it
garretelliot chapter 13 . 8/26/2005
OMG. I love it. It's absolutely the best one yet. I almost cried. That lovely stream of consciousness message on his cell. So wonderful. Another amazing sweet from sour. You know this is going straight to my favs list.
BrittanyLS chapter 12 . 8/22/2005
This is great! I love each chapter!

Some suggestions if you are still thinking about continuing it:

From this Moment or You're Still The One-Shania Twain

I Can't Fight This Feeling Any Longer-REO Speedwagon

Power of Love-Celine Dion

Wind Beneath My Wings-Bette Midler
LandofShadows chapter 12 . 8/21/2005
Very nice...As for the never having done the tango before, I'm sure your mother is quite the tango-er! JK Anyhoo...I liked it. Sorry it took me so long to review, I was on vacation.
lilinsanepeople chapter 12 . 8/20/2005
please write more
blackxrosexvampire chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Aw...Cute. - I liked the detail, and it was cool how it was in Stabler's POV.

-Remi
Bella chapter 12 . 8/18/2005
"I love her so damned much."

That was too damned cute! I loved that line especially. Yet another wonderful chapter. Hm..I'm going to suggest Someone Like You by Van Morrison. Also, someone mentioned The First Cut Is The Deepest by Sheryl Crow...this song was originally sung by Rod Stewart, so it could be used for Elliot's P.O.V also. Something To Talk About by Bonnie Raitt is another. Where You Are by Rascal Flatts. is awesome for song lyrics...Man, keep it up, bring us more YOU ROCK!

B*
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